LJ Idol Week 5: "Building a Better Mousetrap"

[onda_bianca]

It was 2010 when I wore my heart on my sleeve and the man of my dreams blew his nose on it

Comments

[rayaso]

What a god-awful person! Do you ever wonder how you could have been involved with him in the first place? Nothing like calling someone an oversexed, psychotic bitch to cement a relationship.

[onda_bianca]

I had asked myself that same question, but it's never bad in the beginning. Usually the messy, yucky, painful stuff comes after one is already attached and hoping for forever. Well, me anyway. :)

[rayaso]

“They are wrong who say that love is blind. On the contrary, nothing - not even the smallest detail - escapes the eyes; one sees everything in the loved one, notices everything; but melts it all into one flame with the great and simple: I love you.” Gregory J. P. Godek.

[ljidolvillian]

I like that despite your personal pain this has a bit of lightheartedness in it's style.

[onda_bianca]

Thanks....lightheartedness in pain is easier when its not fresh :)

[alycewilson]

Great use of repetition. I was in a very similar relationship for a while. Thank goodness I learned from it!