insurance cards at ready [oneshot]

[salted_taiyaki]

Title: insurance cards at ready (quick, because my heart's dying)
Author: salted_taiyaki
Pairing(s): Onew x Taemin
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2398
Summary: in which taemin feels the decline in their relationship and wonders if he can fix it.

a/n: uh i was watching the suite life on deck (ok my sister had it on don't look at me like

Comments

[mountpurple]

/is happy :D
i got scared in the middle, thinking they were gonna break up ;__;
though it made me sad, you wrote it so nice and flowing and beautiful
♥

[salted_taiyaki]

/is glad that you're happy :)
haha thank you so very much~

[chinagirl4evr]

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I really liked how real it is and I was thinking that they broke up when Taemin said goodbye. I am glad that you gave it a twist. I love OnTae so much, my first pairing.

[salted_taiyaki]

i'm glad you do! thank you very much haha~
yes ontae is great ;A;

[dialytic]

pfff but who really cares where you got your inspiration i get it from inspirational pictures and random things like balloons i'm pretty lame, haha because it turned out to be an amazing piece of writing! ♥ i-i really liked it all to be honest but i loved how you used the flowers as, like, symbols of where they were in the relationship. i felt so sad for taemin though ;__; poor bb crying omg.

"we'd get dirty, we'd spend months trying to climb mountains, we'd feel the ocean breeze. together.

this had to be my favorite line because i love how he emphasized the whole 'we' aspect and not just them separately, love it.
keep it up bb, i love your work ♥ even if i don't comment on it all the time ;-;

[salted_taiyaki]

haha idk it was just so awkward for me to admit it to myself
aw thank you very much, though i think the flowers were so totally cliche--but that's onew in my mind, cliche and stupid--but yeah. haha tyy

; ; i remember when i started it a month ago it was supposed to end at that part and that line was essentially supposed to be like the punch to jinki's face and then have taemin leave but
it didn't
quite
yeah OTL
thank you bb :( so kind

[salted_taiyaki]

yeah it made me :( too haha. yup~
oh good! we need more ontae fans here goshhh
mm i haven't looked for minkey before but i hope you find some good ones!
thank you very much for reading and commenting, as always~

[taemin_knees]

Taeminnieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I was so scared for you~ ;_;

I think the idea of dirty Ontae ///////shot

Brb; basking in my own embarrassment now.

[taemin_knees]

Bah. I should read my comments before I post them

I think I like the idea***

[salted_taiyaki]

hahaaa i wouldn't hurt our precious taemin, not in that way

L O L oh you

also ty for that gif
because of that i was able to spazz about the same event twice in the same day with a couple of hours between each spazzing moment haha