Until the train arrives - 2min [1/1]

[mariposa02]

Until the train arrives | 2min | R | 1300+
au, angst,  | unbeta-ed, character death, suicide | promt used: picture

note: Witten for the 13th shawol_haven challenge. I don't know what makes me write character death all the time -.-, kind of unbeta-ed, I'll go through it tomorrow.

Comments

SPOT!!

[princessliette]

character death, suicide

OMG I'VE BEEN WANTING TO READ THAT >.<

SPOT FOR ME..GONNA SLEEP FIRST THEN READ >.< OMG I'M EXCITED >.

Re: SPOT!!

[mariposa02]

sleep well ;)

beautiful ;___;

[princessliette]

OMG

THIS IS IT..

I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO READ THIS KIND OF FIC AND IT'S REALLY BEAUTIFUL >.< such a short meeting with Minho but it doesn't matter. He's not alone, there's Minho with him until the end of his life >.< OMG

I like it..i like it so much >.<

Re: beautiful ;___;

[mariposa02]

thank you very much sweety.

[darkqueen_25]

Spot!

[darkqueen_25]

...beautiful. Just friggin bloody beautiful is what this is. I don't know how to explain it. It isn't some sort of sappy romance that kills a main character for some love reason. This is just completely realistic and at the same time paining. Wonderful, I just love it.

[mariposa02]

thank you I'm glad you liked it
♥

[tinyscribbles80]

My heart is racing. I'm disappointed with their decision because like Taemin said, it would have been nice if he had met Minho sooner. So I was hoping that they would ditch the idea of suicide and start something meaningful but I guess both of them were bearing something so destructive within themselves that they feel its just too late and and.... GAH!!!! I don't even know what to say! Its just so tragic and the last paragraph had me going OH MY GOD! even though I've seen it coming. Damn! But their last moment together was beautiful *WHAT AM I SAYING?!* I don't know T_T I'm just gonna keep this in my memories.

[mariposa02]

thank you very much (and I'm sorry for the tragic ending)
♥

[coffee_sky]

This is beautiful. Its sad but I know they will be happier if they die. And although death itself is horrible, this is actually a happy ending for both of them.
I love this. It really touches my heart.

[mariposa02]

I'm so glad it managed to touch you.
thank you for reading & commenting ♥

[max2min]

OH REALLY!! *gaped
THEY DID IT TOGETHER!! :O
COOL~

[mariposa02]

lol
thanks for reading and commenting