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[pateshie]

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a/n my old year's resolution is to finish all my wips. this one has been with me for months now, we were especially good friends between 2-3AM. and for some reason it kind of turned out like jongkey: the lana del rey video. i apologize for that, i really do.

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[pateshie]

thank you for reading!

[platohatespoets]

Ow my heart. This was amazing! I love the almost dreamlike quality~

[pateshie]

thank you for reading!

[sluthyun]

FUCK ugh lovely just lovely idk what's so beautiful about your stories but they are, i think it's the way you describe unnecessary things? in such a poetic way? with that little bit of humor sometimes? i guess? (i laughed especially hard at minho getting his heart broken) ah i don't even know omg but this was so strange but also so nice i loved it the ending was abrupt and bitter sweet and i literally loved everything about it.

[pateshie]

aaah, you caught me! jotting down useless details is a habit i've been trying to shake but i'm glad it worked here for you. thank you so much for reading and for your kind words! ♥

[siaht]

I haven't left anyone a comment in years (not proud of that but it's worth mentioning), but I've been reading some of your fics and with this one I just couldn't not say something, even if I don't really know what I want to say haha I guess I just want to tell you that your writing is incredible and I can't remember the last time I thought this about someone's writing. The descriptions make a whole lot of difference, and they don't feel like purple prose the way we see in other fics when the author tries too much. I am absolutely in love. You may expect comments from me whenever you write JongKey again haha (maybe OnKey too)

[pateshie]

this is such a sweet comment, i'm not sure what to say. firstly, of course, thanks so much for reading and letting me know you liked it! i hope in the future, you will once again find many fics that you enjoy, whether they're mine or not. though i do hope i won't let you down~ thank you so much again! ♥

[life_not_knife]

Beautiful. Full of soul and emptiness at the same time. I knew from the word go that this was gonna end in a heartbreak and yet I couldn't help but read on and savor the wonderful and romantic moments, secretly keeping them locked away for the moment when I knew it would end. Just how Jonghyun and Key felt i'm sure. You really got the message across to me in this fic. Thanks so much for writing, I loved it.

Beautifully painful.

Xx L xX

[pateshie]

you've pretty much summed it up. even when i was writing it, i thought of it it as something that wouldn't last, but more jonghyun's character and how he has a very sheltered, romantic worldview. unlike key who has no choice except the life he's leading now. i'm really glad you enjoyed it, thank you for taking the time to leave a comment! ♥