Rawhide Chapter 8

[petitemiel]

Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine

Comments

[thelastaerie]

Arghh... talk about cliff hangers... This is a one beautifully written heartbreaking chapter!

I think maybe Charlie can have a talk with Ennis? There are two boys losing their appetite here, I think.

There's just so much longing in Ennis's “Just stay away from me.”

*DED*

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[greatmtn]

Petitemiel, this was a chapter where things were shattered for Jack and Ennis. Poor guys will go crazy seeing each other everyday but unable to touch. Hope you have a way out of the fix they are in.

greatmtn

[relic_yuy]

So good. How come Jack gave up so easily? Poor Ennis. You write very well. Keep it up.

[trekfan]

this is so reminiscent of the scene in the movie. Jack and Ennis parting ways, ennis wretching in the alley and Jack driving off heartbroken.

Ennis you better wake up before it's too late

more please I love this story (I have recommended it to others!)

[petitemiel]

Thanks to all of you for reading and commenting.

trekfan thanks for recommending the story to others. I'm glad you liked it enough to do that.

relic_yuy Don't worry Ennis' reaction caught Jack a bit off guard that's all but he's very resilient and persistent. :)

greatmtn I don't think there will be a problem getting these two back together after all their love is a force of nature.

To anyone I didn't comment to directly just know that I have read all your comments and I'm grateful for each one. I am working on the next chapter right now, well not right now obviously as I'm writing this right now but you know what I mean.LOL Anyway, Thank you again and I'm off to write.
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