Rawhide Chapter 12

[petitemiel]

Title: Rawhide
Author: PetiteMiel
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: NC-17(eventually)
Warning: Contains harsh language, violence, m/m sexual encounters.
Disclaimer: All characters from Brokeback Mountain belong to Ann Proulx. I am just borrowing them and make no money from their use. No copyright infringement is intended. All other characters are mine

Comments

[rosiet]

Awww...this was another lovely chapter of one of my favourite stories. I just loved naughty Jack at the table, even if it was a bit dangerous. This Jack is more likely to get what he wants from Ennis because he is not prepared to let Ennis get away with ignoring him and not talking about things

[petitemiel]

“Ennis, it’s Ok. I got a few things I want to say to him myself.”

I hope we get to hear THAT.

Don't worry the next chapter will pick up right where this one left off.

Glad you liked this chapter and I'm grateful for the feedback.

[casey28]

“Well it ain’t. Hell I ain’t stopped thinkin’ on ya for more then a second since I met ya Ennis.”

Just love it when Jack sees sweet things like that. And I'm glad that Ennis reassured Jack that he'd always be his friend.

Jack felt unworthy because of how his father treated him, but finally realizes that he doesn't have to feel that way anymore. I'm eager to find out what will happen when Jack and Ennis talk with OMT.

Enjoying this, as always!

[trekfan]

I commented but it did not show up here.

I am glad that Jack was in Ennis' face at the table. he didn't like him not acknowledging him. :D And they both had secrets, Jack with Billy and Ennis with Charlie. Though I think Billy is going to be trouble for them.

Charlie might have had his own thang at one point. Like Ennis and Jack do now

[lara_pinta]

This story is really engrossing. Like I have said before I really like the period setting and I think you write it just right.

I am wondering too, like some of the other readers if Billy might yet cause them trouble but to offset that I am hoping that Charlie might be a good friend to the boys.

A really enjoyable read.

Thank you
Lorna

[bbm_citygirl]

Another great chapter in a terrific story. I love your Jack, he is just such a bright shiny thing and Ennis can’t help but be drawn to him. And I love that this part:

He had also won the friendship of a better man then his father could ever hope to be and that alone told him that he wasn’t unworthy of the things he had sought from his father but rather that his father was unworthy of the importance Jack had afforded his love.

Your Jack is coming to terms with the idea that he won’t be able to control or change how his father views him but he (Jack) can change how much importance he puts into his father’s opinion of him. This realization that OMT’s regard was the one who was unworthy is the beginning of real growth for Jack. Yea!