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[pitza]

Title: Of Nuptials
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: NC-17
Summary: His first marriage is a failure. His second isn't any better.
Warnings/Dislaimers/Spoilers: Weird!fic, spurred by too much alcohol. (Semi)-coercive intercourse. An alternate history. This is BJ(BeforeJulie)!Wilson, after his second marriage.

Comments

[pitza]

Yep. One of the best addictions to have... I can't disagree with it *g* "Wilson... show us the way to Housediction..." *g*

Thank you for your kind comments!

[extrabitter]

It's unlike me to say that this cries out for a sequel, but this one really does, or maybe I just have a plotbunny. If you weren't actually planning on a part two, I might use the idea this gave me.

BTW, I think you handled the violent sex pretty well.

And it may be that "to take drink" is a colloquialism. I understood what you meant, but that form isn't used in modern American English.

Very interesting. It's hard to tell how well this will go over, but it's a fascinating thing to read.

[pitza]

I have a plan, or half-a-plot-bunny of one. But, I'll be over the moon if you're to write yours. I'm sure whatever you write will be so much better than mine, by leaps and bounds.

*rubs hands* can't wait to read your fic! *g*

Ummm.. if you don't mind me asking... what's the acceptable substitute for "taking a drink" in American English. I'm useless at all these vocab/grammar thing.

It's hard to tell how well this will go over, but it's a fascinating thing to read.
Thank you, you're very kind!
:)
And I'm still apprehensive of how this will go over. But I've written, I've posted... *g* Well. And thankfully nobody knows where I live... ;)

So, you'll write, right?

forgive my rudeness,

[olympia_m]

sorry to interfere like this, but - you have a plotbunny???

I do hope you'll pursue it! Please?

Re: forgive my rudeness,

[pitza]

:)

[crashcart9]

Not in the mood for long reviews today, so here goes.
Wow.
Alexandria
(the ever so eloquent and creative)

[pitza]

Hi!

Thank you for your kind comments :)
*g*

[amproof]

You really got into Wilson's head. Reading this was like being trapped in there. I was a little confused on the sex b/c you never say that Wilson *enters* House, you just go from humping his thigh to thrusting harder, and I only figured out that sex was actually happening when you said that he had pulled out. Aside from that, that paragraph was so intense, it was great.

One thing you may want to check--the grammar is a little off in places and it pulled me out of the story b/c I had to think about what you meant. For example, the sentence where House parks the cane and undresses, those verbs should not end in s.

he spats. Actually, he spits. Spats are for your shoes.

fucking limpet. Limpet is a Brit word. Would House use it? Up to you.

"Oh." Thinking about cosmetics makes him want to weep again.Brilliant line

[rinoachan326]

um... what does limpet mean?

[amproof]

I don't know! I'm American. I've only ever heard it used by Brits.

*gets dictionary off desk*

ok. Webster says "a mollusk that clings to rocks"

right. got that cleared up. Go us!

[pitza]

I was a little confused on the sex b/c you never say that Wilson *enters* House
Whoops... forgive me.... ummm... I added a small paragraph to that. But I don't know whether it'll work or not... I'm always so scared when writing sex scenes... *hangs head*

And thank you for the grammar-beta, I tried to rectify some of 'em... but.... ummm... I don't know if there are any more... *facepalms* I'm really hopeless at the grammar/vocab department (my English marm will tell you how crappy I am).

Limpet is a Brit word. Would House use it? Up to you.
*g* Actually that is the only word I know for a 'clinging' mollusc. What do you usually use? I apologize again... I'm just too ignorant. But I'm trying to be better... *g* Maybe leeching? But limpets and leeches are quite different? or not?

I don't really know if there's going to be a House POV, there's a half-a-plotbunny of one for it, but... uh... it's a half-bunny.

It is a *huge* thing for him to not only keep quiet, but to allow himself to be abused,It is... But when I was writing this, I

[rubysnowflake]

"He realizes belatedly, as he surrenders the last shred of wakefulness to exhaustion and excess, that he's sleeping on the wrong side of the bed."

I absolutely love that line, it just seems to fit so right with Wilson's mental state. Great fic in all.

[pitza]

*g* thank you very much! I'm glad you liked... And... *grin* I like your icon!