Comments | plawehr: {PG-13} That thing you do

plawehr

{PG-13} That thing you do

Sep 27, 2009 04:57

Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Changmin/Yoochun
Genre: Romance, Angst
Summary: And Yoochun knows, he understands in his heart, that this is all they will ever be.
Disclaimer: This is real only if birds can bark.
A/N: It's a little too rainy on my side of the hemisphere, and I'm bringing rain on this ship too.

( And Yoochun knows, he understands in his heart, that this is all they will ever be. )

genre: angst, pairing: changmin/yoochun

Comments 12

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plawehr September 27 2009, 08:14:28 UTC

*noms on cookies* thank youuuu~! :D ♥

I wanted to try bringing in some angst, I'm happy to hear that I didn't fail too hard. u_u

konzatsu September 26 2009, 22:58:41 UTC

dhfdh. ebbeh. *whimper*

i really really loved this. all secret and hushed. and ow. ♥

minor nitpick- you slip into past tense at 'Instead, there were whispers of fearful kisses' and 'what he needs more than anything was for Changmin to say that he belonged to him, something Changmin refused to acknowledge'. :3

the_hedfones September 27 2009, 02:40:30 UTC

i was just about to comment the same thing, haha. :)

plawehr September 27 2009, 08:12:39 UTC

Thanks so much for the heads up ><; I appreciate it! Fixed that already (I think).

I'm glad you liked it anyway~! ♥

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plawehr September 27 2009, 08:06:54 UTC

*blushes~* THANK YOU SO MUCH! ♥

gompi September 27 2009, 00:42:55 UTC

♥

is it bad i want more!!!!!!!!!

plawehr September 27 2009, 08:04:15 UTC

If I could keep writing, I would! >3<
I have a sorta sequel in mind though. Yay? :D

♥

gompi September 27 2009, 20:23:00 UTC

♥

yay! i love sequels.....

happy ones!! or sad ones!!

:D

the_hedfones September 27 2009, 02:40:55 UTC

lovely. ♥

plawehr September 27 2009, 08:15:30 UTC

thanks so much ♥