Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 16

Jul 16, 2008 08:56

 
Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Thanks: To Em (smilesalot) for all your help and support, and to Keren for your constant encouragement, it means so much to me. 
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rightwhere_u_r July 16 2008, 18:11:42 UTC
Hey there Christine, I am now in England, and don't have long on the computer, but I am looking forward to reading this when I get home! Hugs from London!

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 12:33:58 UTC
Hey Mel! *waves*

Hope you enjoy the chapter once you get home! Hope you are enjoying London, despite the wet weather!!!!

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nosunlight July 16 2008, 18:57:53 UTC
:(

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 12:43:00 UTC
Yeah...:( its not good, but light will be coming into the tunnel soon.

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zankou164 July 16 2008, 19:26:44 UTC
well its angsty and upsetting but at the same time the plot line is so great and the english perfect! absoloutly amazing! for all it was an angsty read it was still amazing

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 12:44:11 UTC
Hi Matt, thanks for your comment, I'm glad you liked the chapter, it means a lot to me, but I know its upsetting at the moment. Things will get better soon, I promise.

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dreamy40 July 16 2008, 20:16:50 UTC
That was hideous. A lot of hearsay, misplaced emotions, and heartache: Jack, Ennis, Carrie, Justin. You wrote that so well I could feel for all of them.

And yeah, white on brown is easier on the eye. Thank you!

dreamy40

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 12:45:56 UTC
Hi dreamy, I'm glad you got to read it, I'm sorry about the problems with it at first. I'm so sorry it was hard to read though in more ways than one, but things will get better soon.

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ramona4jake July 16 2008, 20:41:47 UTC
Damn, Ennis has to be himself, frightened, cautious to let his feelings take the lead and live his life freely and happily ! Hope he didn't push Jack to do something stupid, I'm really afraid right now !
Thank you so much, I hope you up-date soon !

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poppyhoney_67 July 17 2008, 21:36:45 UTC
Hi ramona, thanks for your comment, yeah, Ennis is Ennis, he's got a lot of negative feelings flying around his head right now. Jack is heartbroken, but please dont be afraid, things will right themselves.

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