Natalia Jihanson and Sasha

[potcsues]

Double-Sue. Of the "I Want To Be With Orlando Will And Johnny Jack! To Hell With Canon!" variety.

Oh and I added "Plot" as a field since I always include it anyway.

TITLE: For Life, For Love
CULPRIT: Mistress Natalia Same name as Sue. Never a good sign.
SUMMARY: "Natalia and Sasha feel they are destined for lives neither of them wants. What

Comments

[anni_the_diva]

What? Only two bad eggs?

[potcsues]

I was feeling generous and I graded it before I finished the entire report. But looking again you're right to question it.

I think it needs to be upped to three.

[niav]

Will is also stupid enough to believe that being "woo"ed by Jack will be the perfect cure for the rape victim's bad attitude.
*STAB STAB STAB*

[prosenazi]

I think the sues have officially stabbed my spleen with this one.

"Will?" Sasha said nervously, "I don't want to be alone."

Will: Well I do thank you very much *with that leaves sueverse and goes back to elizabeth*

[wolfychan]

Oooh! Oooh! Where's the POTC Litmus test? Can I have the URL? Please?

The PotC Litmus Test is on my LJ page.

[araeph]

Just scroll down a little and you'll see it, along with links to my PPC story and my other nice little PotC-related rants.

Come to think of it, I need to update. This story has given me an idea.

[farmercuerden]

Ooh! There's a PotC branch of the PPC? I want to see the sues SUFFER!

There are two.

[araeph]

One is Megan@Midnight's story, found here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1506827

The other is mine. The agents start off in the Department of Mary Sues, and go on to found the Department of Technical Errors. I posted the link a little farther down.

Sorry to clutter up the response page!