Incubi & Vampires.. Oh My! (part 17)

[premerseahshiko]

15 years later
It was winter and freezing cold as winters go in Russia. I'm just lucky we didn't move to Siberia, Tao thought, smiling a little. But at least he could easily see all the stars in the wintertime, or at least when it wasn't snowing. He was 27 now and devilishly handsome and even taller than Mikhail. The snow had begun to fall, little

Comments

[nicemelody]

A very beautiful story!!!!

Hope this isn't the ending.
I really hope you can write more. like all of them living together and seeing tao and masami getting married. >.<

but still, you did a great job. *thumbs up*

[faelights]

Awww, so cute. Teehee.

[silver_lion23]

You should add Akihito's and Asami's pov as well. There are loose ends on their side, but other than that, great story.

[paranoia_woman]

I love it. Should it stop here? Well it could but I do have something to say about that. In bad rhyme, because I'm Nutz.

Story ends?
No, I say.
Sequels write them, Now! Today!

Banquet over.
Stomach Growls.
Don't stop here. I'm hungry now.

Masami Wed
To Tao soon?
Family reunion - Grandchildren too.

I'll be waiting
Till your done.
Thank you for all this you've done.

Now I'm heading back to the Asylum. ^__^

[edlvmvmmrm]

Great story!. I also agree with silver_ lion, it is a good ending but there are some loose ends. Will be good to see Asami's and Akihito's point of view. How Akihito and Masami reacted when they were "kidnapped" by Asami. How Masami reacted when she was told that Asami was her father, did she accepted him easily even though Asami separated her from Feilong, Tao and Mikhail?

I will also will like to see getting them all together, ending the feud between Feilong and Asami and, is there is any other way than Tao and Masami getting together?. That way Feilong will be able to visit Akihito and the new baby, maybe? But then that will be similar to Adoption Fun, hmm? I don't know. Well, anyways think about it, it was a great story.