Ancient “emo emo” writings from a broken and depressed Jake.

[primalcivil]

I found this deep within an ancient notebook from my sophomore year in high school. I remember having a tune in my head as I wrote it which I hope is my excuse for the rhythm being all fucked up in places. Anyway, it’s ancient Yannian writing and I think it’s nifty. Plus I’m making this entry instead of doing my English ‘Exposition and Analysis

Comments

[gingerpuddin]

I have perhaps heard that before. or somethings similar. It is excellent.

[primalcivil]

I may have read it to you in nights long past.

[gingerpuddin]

yes, it does have a bit of a nostalgic quality.

[_hopeless_poet_]

I read a quote today that made me think of you:

"For he today that sheds his blood with me shall be my brother" -William Shakespeare

When are you breaks from school? We must reunite and wreak havoc once again, side by side. *Cocks shotgun* The vampires won't know what hit them...

*Evil grin*

[primalcivil]

I have a short break in two weeks. Will you be visiting home soon? Other than that i don't think i have a long one until Thanksgiving. I do tend to come home on semi-regular weekends, so if you were visiting any time soon....

[_hopeless_poet_]

I'll be coming home the evening of October 7th for my school's short break

[immortalemporer]

im tired but i could, it explains a lot

[faye_madison]

I'm not going to point out specifics, but know that there are certain things that may seem like they almost rhyme, but they still do not

and I'm not going to say you're my type
but goddamn, do i love you

Look at me here! I'm echoing! Wooooo.....

[primalcivil]

Rhyme: The correspondence of two or more words with similar-sounding final syllables placed so as to echo one another.

They rhyme well enough. Punk!

[greeneyedwench]

oh fantastic hairy beast that is yani, its amber. Me, Kate johnson and a very sexy norweigan dame named bridgitte request premission to perhaps stay with you (or someone you know in burlington who wont date rape us) for the night of the november 22 so that we might be able to attend a dropkick murphy show. PRETTY PLEASE?

oh yeah, another preticularly hott chick named mandy faye might just be there too......

[primalcivil]

Mandy Faye, hmmmm? You sure do know how to drive a bargain... I suppose I cannot refuse.

[faye_madison]

yes, yes you could
very easily

[primalcivil]

Nuh-uh!