Entry #01 - "Birthdays"

Apr 18, 2006 17:47

Title: Birthdays
Written By: motoredxheart
Timeline: Pre-show and pre-Ep-214
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence
Genre: pov gapfiller

Birthdays )

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damietta April 18 2006, 23:09:59 UTC
Wow. This tapped into my theory of Brian and birthdays so well. I've always, always thought this is how it went down. Brian and his beautiful, big heart crushed from early on.

I think you perfectly captured the downward spiral of his day (and the one in the hospital that he didn't even remember, ouch), but the wonderful stories of his friends (when they were on the show, as characters, allowed to be friends) trying to make the day special.

But, of course, it was Justin, who makes it all better. The image of the final risk at love was great (as was the one of Justin running down the beach).

A perfect present for Brian and us.

Deb

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wowkelseysgreat April 18 2006, 23:24:50 UTC
Awwww!!!! Soooo Sweet!!!! I just discovered this little challenge thingy. I'm not exactly sure what is going on, but if there's fanfic then I'm there!!!! A great way to start off my reading!!!

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randysgirl_645 April 19 2006, 04:04:27 UTC
It's a great way to explain brian's phobia or hatred of birthdays.

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jule1122 April 19 2006, 13:27:44 UTC
Boor young Brian. My heart just aches for him. I can see his birthdays happening like this. jule

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seanmegansean April 19 2006, 13:31:10 UTC
It really is a miracle Mr Kinney turned into this wonderful man after all. F* Jack :((

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