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[raquia]

Title: Fall Into You
Author: esrafil
Rating: G
Pairing: Ohtori+Hiyoshi
Notes: Future!AU timeline, about ten years after canon. This turned out really gen. Written with nyuu_kon and sharona1x2 in mind; it ended up longer than I expected, so I hope you don't mind sharing? ♥ to you both for loving both characters as much as I do.

Comments

[kidboomerang]

Quite nice! I like your characterization of Ohtori here, especially the flustered points. (I would be more effusive in my praise but I'm between classes right now and need to get going, so -- yes. Yes. Well done. =3)

[raquia]

Thank you! Sorry this response is so late. XD;

[gekidasa]

This is so cute, and it's so absolutely HIYOSHI, the being uneasy around people.

[raquia]

Thank you! :3 I need to pick this setting back up and work on it more.

[muzivitch]

gekidasa sent me links last night, and absolutely loved this. Both Ohtori and Hiyoshi are spot on, and that's such a rarity. :D

It puts me in the mood to write for them again.

[flyingmachine]

Aww. ^_^ You're work is always so refreshing, and dare I say adorable. The fic just felt so comfortable and sleepy even with a flustered Ohtori and uneasy Hiyoshi. ♥ Love them both in your writing. It was greatly enjoyed!

[polyurethane]

Aww, cute. :D

I liked your Hiyoshi in this. And Ohtori burying his face in Hiyoshi's pillow? So sweet.