Shameless Plug...kinda

Nov 16, 2004 06:34

http://www.poetrypen.com/illumination/

This is some of my stuff,lemme know whatcha think.

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eighthcloud November 16 2004, 13:35:16 UTC
I think there's something wrong with the link ... it's not really taking me anywhere. ?

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lost_in_my_room November 16 2004, 16:09:44 UTC
i found that too

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razor_blame November 16 2004, 19:52:53 UTC
:( i dunno what to do.

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razor_blame November 16 2004, 19:52:08 UTC
does it need to be hosted like the pictures? (i only pretend to know what i'm doing...i'm technically challenged)

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daphyn November 16 2004, 19:09:12 UTC
Those are wonderful. I'm not much of a poetry person, really...usually I have trouble getting into it. But I read all of yours and loved them. You put real feeling into the word choice. My favorite line:
So long I've been an island
Longing silently for a shipwreck
That just...wow. *hugs* I'm sorry you have the kind of pain that was required to write those. If there's ever anything I can do to help in any way just let me know.

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razor_blame November 16 2004, 19:50:46 UTC
Hey, thanks, i love it when people like my work.

And don't be sorry, without heartbreak, i have nothing to say....must be a pessimist:P

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daphyn November 16 2004, 19:53:50 UTC
Heh, I know how that goes :)

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