Oh Walt. Oh Jesse. Oh the roller coaster that is their relationship. I never know what to expect with these two and you captured that ever so well.
I loved the length of this story. It allowed me to get really lost in the premise. It was great how by turns Jesse was suspicious , trusting , vulnerable, sassy, and everything between and beyond. I was actually half expecting some story of abuse to come out but was pleased to see it not. Much sexier that way. Also Walt's beard plus Jesse's balls = total loss of fine and complex motor control. Good thing that was only temporary or I'd never have been able to form this reply.
Thanks so much! This was a really fun one, because of all the dialogue, because Jesse had more room to push back, and because the premise just amuses me.
My original interest in Walt/Jesse wouldn't have really supported actual slash; in comparison to other m/m ships I'm interested in, this was originally a much more academic pursuit, in connection with the show's exploration/critique of masculinity. But then I realized no one was writing it, and I was so baffled that my brain tricked me into filling the void.
Eat your heart out Indy, I just discovered the lost script of S3~
Seriously, I love the dialogue, the raunchiness, the chemistry, the humanity. Walt's unencumbered honesty is a surprise, but a welcomed oddity in this alternate universe where students can fall in love with their science teachers (or vice versa~). The end is not entirely bittersweet, but wholesome and authentic. Great premise & execution!
Thanks. Objectively, this premise is a little silly, but in a way that I think would be much more common and much more easily forgiven in a bigger fandom with a less complicated pairing. I was hoping to write something a bit more fun than I can usually get out of Walt and Jesse, but still get the character details right enough to make it believable. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Skyler is gonna be pissed :D
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Skyler has enough reason to be pissed without this; I don't think she needs to know.
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"It's bad enough you're cooking meth with your former student - but now you're sleeping with him, too?" *things fly across the room at Walt*
Walt tends to inspire projectile object throwing in others...
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I loved the length of this story. It allowed me to get really lost in the premise. It was great how by turns Jesse was suspicious , trusting , vulnerable, sassy, and everything between and beyond. I was actually half expecting some story of abuse to come out but was pleased to see it not. Much sexier that way. Also Walt's beard plus Jesse's balls = total loss of fine and complex motor control. Good thing that was only temporary or I'd never have been able to form this reply.
Oh, and _Jesse's_ dirty talk. Unf and gah.
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I don't really see the whole Walt/Jesse thing, but some fics just manage to blow past my plausibility barriers and make me believe it could happen. :)
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My original interest in Walt/Jesse wouldn't have really supported actual slash; in comparison to other m/m ships I'm interested in, this was originally a much more academic pursuit, in connection with the show's exploration/critique of masculinity. But then I realized no one was writing it, and I was so baffled that my brain tricked me into filling the void.
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If not the best *______*
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Seriously, I love the dialogue, the raunchiness, the chemistry, the humanity. Walt's unencumbered honesty is a surprise, but a welcomed oddity in this alternate universe where students can fall in love with their science teachers (or vice versa~). The end is not entirely bittersweet, but wholesome and authentic. Great premise & execution!
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