Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 10
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.
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first let me congratulate you..
was a beautiful chapter!!filled with many emotions
I love when jasper said “And that is going to have to be ok with your mommy, cause you know what, I am not going anywhere.” lovely!!
and rose trying to reunite them again..she´s awesome,overstepping the problems to show Alice her support..very concerned!!
and esme overprotective and love her like another daughter..
carlisse so sweet being his doctor..
I love this chapter!!!
you did a great job!!!
:D
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Thank you so much, I am really happy you liked it. :)
I think Rose was in her maternal role, plus she has always looked over Alice, so she couldn't help but get there and be there for Alice. And Jasper.
Thanks again sweetie!
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Others mistakes weren’t hers and I couldn’t blame her for anything. So instead, I would teach her things and show her the world.
^Love that part.
*sigh* domesticated Jasped holding a baby girl. Me likey.
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Jasper just couldn't help himself but fell in love with her. :)
I saw you posted too, have to run and read that. I am so excited already.
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Seriously Jasper, could you get any hotter?
Great chapter! I'm anxiously awaiting Alice's baby bliss reaction to this "new" development. We all know she knows Jasper won't let her down but I'm also excited to find out the break-up stuff...
*refresh sigh refresh* Guess I'll wait til you post next week sometime...
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We are getting there, no worries. :) I think not yet next chapter and not yet the one after the next chapter, but then we will find out why she left. I just have to prepare the stage right. :)
Hope you'll like it.
Thanks again for the lovely review. :)
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You're doing a beautiful job. The story has everything a reader could want and then you threw in a cute baby...come on...who doesn't love babies? Especially ones that have captured the love and attention of the leading man...golden.
This is a great story. I'm SO glad I stumbled upon it while I was bored at work...
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Aww, I am glad you like it. Especially since this is my first real story and I have never done this before. Jasper and the baby are a win, I agree. I can't get the picture out of my head myself. :)
I am very glad you stumbled upon it, too. :)
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“And that is going to have to be ok with your mommy, cause you know what, I am not going anywhere.” awwwww
Sorry cant stop saying awwww, it really was.
And Rose coming was so good, awwww lol
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Now you ran out of chapters to read, lol. You are amazing in your reviews. I will try to update soon, but it will probably happen sometimes later this week / beginning of the next.
Thanks again!
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