Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 10

May 17, 2009 17:03

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 10
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

Chapter 10 )

jasper, fanfiction, alice

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 07:12:37 UTC
Aww, thank you so much hun! :) Squee, I am so happy you liked it. There will be more Carlisle in the next chapter, just for you. :) I also always imagine them as the actors who play them. Can't help it.

*hugs*

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 17:50:38 UTC
It would be interesting too see Meyer's choices as the cast, but it would be pretty hard if not impossible to convince me now. But if they had started with them, who knows. But I love my cast. :)

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andre07hsm May 18 2009, 03:44:13 UTC
hi mon!!!
first let me congratulate you..
was a beautiful chapter!!filled with many emotions
I love when jasper said “And that is going to have to be ok with your mommy, cause you know what, I am not going anywhere.” lovely!!
and rose trying to reunite them again..she´s awesome,overstepping the problems to show Alice her support..very concerned!!
and esme overprotective and love her like another daughter..
carlisse so sweet being his doctor..

I love this chapter!!!
you did a great job!!!

:D

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 07:14:08 UTC
Hey hun!
Thank you so much, I am really happy you liked it. :)

I think Rose was in her maternal role, plus she has always looked over Alice, so she couldn't help but get there and be there for Alice. And Jasper.

Thanks again sweetie!

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ciza May 18 2009, 05:21:13 UTC
I've got tears in my eyes, bb. And a wide smile on my face. This was such a beautiful chapter.

Others mistakes weren’t hers and I couldn’t blame her for anything. So instead, I would teach her things and show her the world.
^Love that part.

*sigh* domesticated Jasped holding a baby girl. Me likey.

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ciza May 18 2009, 05:22:33 UTC
*Jasper, I meant. Ahem.

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 07:15:15 UTC
Awww, I am so happy you liked it. I didn't know you are reading this story. Squee.

Jasper just couldn't help himself but fell in love with her. :)

I saw you posted too, have to run and read that. I am so excited already.

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prettypony39 May 18 2009, 12:32:17 UTC
And while I was looking down at Amber, something was suddenly clear to me. She was so vulnerable and tiny, and when she grabbed my finger with her small hand, something happened. I felt a connection. And in that moment I made a promise to myself and to her, I would always protect her and take care of her.
Seriously Jasper, could you get any hotter?

Great chapter! I'm anxiously awaiting Alice's baby bliss reaction to this "new" development. We all know she knows Jasper won't let her down but I'm also excited to find out the break-up stuff...

*refresh sigh refresh* Guess I'll wait til you post next week sometime...

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 12:38:15 UTC
I am so excited that you liked it. :) Squee.

We are getting there, no worries. :) I think not yet next chapter and not yet the one after the next chapter, but then we will find out why she left. I just have to prepare the stage right. :)

Hope you'll like it.

Thanks again for the lovely review. :)

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prettypony39 May 18 2009, 15:28:58 UTC
I understand your setup...it's cool...I know it's coming. I'm loving the complete story in the meantime *smiles*

You're doing a beautiful job. The story has everything a reader could want and then you threw in a cute baby...come on...who doesn't love babies? Especially ones that have captured the love and attention of the leading man...golden.

This is a great story. I'm SO glad I stumbled upon it while I was bored at work...

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 15:40:35 UTC
Thank you. :)

Aww, I am glad you like it. Especially since this is my first real story and I have never done this before. Jasper and the baby are a win, I agree. I can't get the picture out of my head myself. :)

I am very glad you stumbled upon it, too. :)

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pamela0201 May 18 2009, 15:38:55 UTC
Awwww that was the cutest chapter ever. If possible, I have fallen more in love with your Jasper.

“And that is going to have to be ok with your mommy, cause you know what, I am not going anywhere.” awwwww

Sorry cant stop saying awwww, it really was.

And Rose coming was so good, awwww lol

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realynn8 May 18 2009, 15:42:11 UTC
Awww. :) I am glad you liked it.

Now you ran out of chapters to read, lol. You are amazing in your reviews. I will try to update soon, but it will probably happen sometimes later this week / beginning of the next.

Thanks again!

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applecandy22 May 19 2009, 22:27:19 UTC
yes! I agree! I totally loved that part~

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realynn8 May 20 2009, 08:03:46 UTC
Aww, thank you. :)

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