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realynn8

Sometimes Goodbye Is A Second Chance, Chapter 14

Jun 25, 2009 12:23

Title: SOMETIMES GOODBYE IS A SECOND CHANCE, Chapter 14
Author: Realynn8
Characters/Pairings: Alice/Jasper
Rating: NC-17 / M
Category: AU / AH
Spoilers: None
Summary: After 5 years of rebuilding his life and putting the pieces back together, everything falls apart once again when she comes storming back into his life.

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jasper, fanfiction, alice

Comments 40

ladysaruman June 25 2009, 12:05:40 UTC

Rawr first comment. And I haven't even read it yet. I guess I just like staking that first claim ^^
But don't worry, when I DO read it I'll come back and comment again (and review on FF of course!)
Love ya dear :D

realynn8 June 25 2009, 18:00:29 UTC

Yay, thank you so much. You are such a sweetie. And I love you, too. :)

applecandy22 June 26 2009, 20:45:49 UTC

lolzz, well, I had the first claim a while back, so enjoy ur victory. :)

realynn8 June 26 2009, 21:40:35 UTC

LOL You two make me laugh. I love you both! :)

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kitty_boots14 June 25 2009, 16:56:47 UTC

this chapter was amazing. i always thought they would both know the truth and would get back together but when it finally happened i wanted to jump for joy. those two were just made for each other.

realynn8 June 25 2009, 18:01:01 UTC

Thank you so much, I am really glad you liked it. :) Means a lot to me. And I agree with you, they definitely were.

prettypony39 June 25 2009, 20:12:05 UTC

And you do it again! I love reading the perspective changes for the events that occur here. These events really could only be told from his point of view and I'm so glad that's what happened!

I'm loving that they're finally starting to realize what happened and seem to be taking the steps to correct the mistakes. They truly are a lovely pair...

Kudos!

realynn8 June 25 2009, 22:18:14 UTC

Thank you so so much. :) I am glad you liked it. And I think it is good, too, that the story is told from both POV's, because otherwise it would be too one-sided. I think, at least. :)

Again, thank you! *hugs*

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realynn8 June 25 2009, 22:27:58 UTC

Mhm. ;) They sure did. ;)

Thank you so much, that really means a lot. Aww, I am glad you liked it and that you love him. He really is pretty lovable. :)

Thank you so so much.

lys_chan_83 June 26 2009, 02:53:36 UTC

I'm like Jasper, at a loss for words, totally speechless, by the awesomess of this chapter. Obviously, I think they have to talk a little more, about their present & future I guess, but I like the way they are going.

realynn8 June 26 2009, 13:32:23 UTC

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. :) And the talk continues in the next chapter, no worries. Again, thanks.