Truth and Deceit, Chapter Three

[redoren]

Truth And Deceit
Chapter Three, The Necessary Deception

Usual disclaimer applies. I don't own or make money from them but I sure wish I did (own them that is).
Just a general spoiler warning: I have watched the latest episodes and I can't guaruntee that they haven't influenced my writing, but I haven't knowingly included any major spoilers for this

Comments

[obsessive_a101]

If the story just twisted how I think it has twisted then I love you... (^_^) Wait. I love you anyways. And I also love your Tom. (^____^)

[redoren]

LOL! Well I won't confirm or deny anything, but please tell me, how do you think I just twisted it? For my own interest, and because I made sure that this chapter could be taken several ways and I'd be curious to know which way came out as the dominant one. LOL! I had a lot of fun playing with this. I'd be curious to know which way you picked up on because I think I may have, unconsciously, leaned towards one twist rather than another :)

[redoren]

Oh, I forgot to say, thank you :) I'm glad you like my Tom. I like him too :D He's too damn fun to write so he ends up being mentioned more and more. It was kind of inevitable that he would end up in the majority of this chapter.

[obsessive_a101]

Your Tom is adorable, and so in character because he manages to keep his sense of humor even at the end of the world (see Occupation). (^_^)

And my perspective of the twist? That Adama is the last of the final five... and that Laura is slowly dying inside each time she has to kill the copy of him that has snuck on board, that he is trying to convince her of something because he loves her, that she has trusted Tom with the job of killing him if deemed necessary (and that Tom secretly loves her), that she loves him and can't kill him herself, that she has mentally separated her Bill from all the other "Bill's," and that somehow, this is going to lead to some good things... Hehe.

[redoren]

I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I hope you enjoy the next chapter as soon as I get it finished :) ::huggles::

[lullabymoon]

Dude. Awesome. And I'm even more intruiged now. And OMFG! is Bill a cylon? Tell me I'm not reading the implication wrong.

I love it, especially her guilt and interaction with Tom. More please? :D

[redoren]

More shall surely follow soon ::huggles::

Thanks for the comment. As for your theory that Bill is a Cylon LOL! I can't say but I promise I won't just leave the story without a proper conclusion that will hopefully deal with all the twists.

[lullabymoon]

ARgh. Spoilsport, I want to know! Preferably now! ;D

*huggles*

[redoren]

LOL! I'll do my best to finish this fic asap, hopefully a new chapter will be done by tomorrow :)

[sapphs]

OMG have you made the Final Cylon who I think you've made him?! Dude, I am in awe. This chapter was so ambiguous and yet so damn insightful. I loved it!

[redoren]

LOL! I refuse to comment on who the final Cylon is in my fic, but I promise...there's a few hellish twists along the way to revealing the ending :)

[caramelapples11]

Oh that was INTERESTING! I absolutely can't wait for more! :D:D:D

[redoren]

Yay! I'm so happy that you can't wait for more. I shall therefore try to get it finished asap and post it tomorrow. :D