to whom it may concern (just you please)

Sep 03, 2014 21:00

to whom it may concern (just you please)
For: serenelilacs
Rating: pg
Length: 3938 words
Summary: highschool!au. Luhan gets stuck with the biggest puzzle he has ever met, Do Kyungsoo.
Warning(s): none
Author's Note: I’m sorry for going out of point but I still hope you’ll like it nevertheless :)

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larks September 4 2014, 01:17:18 UTC
Yells. This is so cute, I can('t) stand it.

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violetkecil September 4 2014, 08:38:01 UTC

mydeerest_luhan September 5 2014, 04:39:23 UTC
I really like this! I feel like this is exactly a spot-on on their characters and attitudes in real life so it's easy to imagine this happening in my head. :)

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soft_daisy September 7 2014, 07:08:10 UTC
Kyungsoo is quiet but his smile is the loudest thing Luhan has ever heard. Luhan would do anything to hear it again and again.
♥ That first sentence just stood out to me. Really like how you described their thoughts and interactions so beautifully throughout the story.

Luhan thinks it’s cruel, for Kyungsoo to make the mistake of slotting the letter into his locker instead
I love this idea of the love letter being put in the wrong locker, but what turns out to be like a mistake ends up being so right :D

But in that instant, more becomes a mere figment of nothing.

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