i keep runnin' runnin' runnin' for horrours

[feixing]

Title: i keep runnin' runnin' runnin'
For: horrours
Pairing: Lu Han/Xiumin
Rating: PG-13
Length: ~8,600 words
Summary, potential warnings: Going to boarding school in America, Lu Han just wants to forget he's the (adopted!) son of a duke and focus on two things: soccer, and Minseok. That doesn't really work out.

Comments

[perfectiontales]

miia's spot

[horrours]

ty bbgirl \o/ i will return to it later once i get some free time to reply!

[horrours]

shrieks

continues shriekingyou must be someone i know right??? are you secretly one of my best friends who knows everything i like or do we just have some weird psychic connection

[seulpeo]

SCREAMS HOW CAN I REPLY TO THIS COMMENT IN A WAY THAT IS BEFITTING :( :( :(

but seriously, ive never written xiuhan before and i saw you liked them a lot so i threw out a few working outlines and i was like "I WILL GIVE RECIPIENT-CHAN XIUHAN" and then this happened :'(
im glad that you liked the little details you did!! soccer!xiuhan is the best kind of xiuhan lbr

"hops away on face" crying because you are the cutest

[perfectiontales]

finally finally finally there's a soccer au ;___;

Lu Han's deliberate disregard for personal space and Minseok's putting up with it.
xiuhan summed up in one line t b h

Lu Han is strong and tall and independent, too, but not in an effortless way like Minseok is.
ohhh i really liked this line :3

well, honestly, i really enjoyed reading the way you wrote minseok's. lu han being ~british-but-not-really~ took a while to settle in but minseok's character made it work well. commendably complability between characters yes ;; i also really liked the smaller details here, like minseok insisting on how it is soccer, not football, jongin's tragic love for chelsea, h o y a and junmyeon and suchen and oh! kris' character was a really nice touch, too, the way he accompanies lu han without a word and how he finally gives into chanyeol. cries ; w; all of it was lovely!!

thank you for writing this!! and for giving it a happy ending!! ♡

aaand pls do provide photographic evidence of minseok in a towel. i am a visual learner after all. minseok

[horrours]

how much do i gotta pay for that minseok to be accidentally delivered to the wrong address

[seulpeo]

YES SOCCER AU :D :D :D

thank you for reading! i was kind of not feeling it with the lu han as a dukes son too (tbh i had a lot of doubt about going with this storyline because you have to suspend a lot of common sense, aka "why is this chinese guy now british royalty") so im glad that you enjoyed my minseok :'(
as for towel!minseok, thats a hot commodity i cannot provide........... ;_;

[alaeaureae]

THIS WAS SO SO SO SO SO SO CUTE

SO CUTE

IT WAS ADORABLE

i just???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

so cute ;~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~;

and does the basketball team now slay and so cute at minseok as lu han's plus one ;~;

so cute ;~;

[seulpeo]

AWWWWWW THANK YOU THIS IS SUCH A CUTE COMMENT!!

some closure for you - the basketball team is greatly improved not because kris is a really gr8 player but because hes good at telling people what to do and the coach is like eh you can do that instead then. minseok and lu han are very good co-captains and most of the school student body loads themselves onto buses to go watch them lead the team at championships!

[beastlyshine]

AW THATS SO CUTE EXCEPT PRETTY CRUEL BECAUSE NOW LUHANS GONNA HAVE TO DEAL WITH HIDING HIS BOYFRIEND IN CASE HIS FAMILY ISNT STRICT ENOUGH good thing england just legalized gay marriage i guess. ill let you get away with it just this once HAHA

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 i fully appreciate the krisyeol and by krisyeol i mean chanyeol

[seulpeo]

LMAO DONT THINK TOO HARD ABOUT IT im sure they will be happy together, they go to school in america and can get married in california or something :D

chanyeol is always a good thing~

[loudestoflove]

oh this was so cute!! i really liked the way that you established lu han's history and the pressures of his family, and the way that that contrasted with his life in the states (with minseok). kris the grumpy guard (macking on chanyeol for SHAME)!! i rly liked your lu han, the way that he wheedles and pushes minseok but in the end he's really a good kid who would fly back to another continent just to drag his brother out of hiding and basically talk him out of his cold feet with taking over as duke etc. and the xiuhan had this rly sweet, mellow vibe to it, just comfortable and nice and i liked it a lot!!

[seulpeo]

thank you kendra!!!! thank you for reading and thank you thank you thank you for your brilliant idea what would i be without you :'(