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saint_elsewhere

Ghosts in My Head (Chapter 1)

Dec 15, 2011 20:53

Chapter 1

Anthony coughed at the culminating dust that arose in the stuffy air as he cracked his musty window ajar, carefully pulling it up as it creaked. He waved off the foggy air as he peered his head through the window. The lowering sun shone brightly over the busy, tight streets filled with bright cars and the city was loud with the bustle of ( Read more... )

pg-13, schizophrenia

Comments 24

destiel09 December 16 2011, 02:14:46 UTC

OH MY GOD! That's awesome. So original, interesting and amazing! Waouh! You're a genius! ^.^ I want the next chapter!! No... that's not pressure XD Seriously this is sooo good!

saint_elsewhere December 16 2011, 04:21:13 UTC

Why thank you :D Glad you like it!

michaelangelo24 December 16 2011, 02:18:20 UTC

Poor Anthony. :( I'm very interested to see how Anthony gets Ian back while simultaneously dealing with schizophrenia.

saint_elsewhere December 16 2011, 04:23:12 UTC

Schizophrenia really is quite sad :(

Thanks for reading :) I realize that it's quite different from what other people post :P

vespiquen8 December 16 2011, 03:42:34 UTC

Omg, love love loved this! (I just realized how often I start my comments with omg XD)

write the next chapter. NOW. please?? :) ^-^

saint_elsewhere December 16 2011, 04:23:49 UTC

omg omg omg omg me too! HAHA!

I'm writing it as I'm typing this!

ihanoverian December 16 2011, 04:36:22 UTC

Oh gosh, this was so sad to read...I'm like on the verge of tears :(
Now I really need to know what happens to poor Anthony!

saint_elsewhere December 16 2011, 04:37:28 UTC

Now THAT'S the reaction I was looking for! :P

hvnlyumbrlla December 16 2011, 06:29:30 UTC

Wow! Good, original concept! And well written, as usual :)

My brother is schizophrenic so I know quite a bit about the illness and I can definitely relate to Ian. It's hard to deal with and be around it. Hard to comprehend. Great job with the emotions and reactions, very realistic! Can't wait to see the rest :)

saint_elsewhere December 16 2011, 06:31:20 UTC

Thanks!

Please tell me if I'm writing something wrong, because I don't know anyone with the illness, and this is my first time researching it. Please correct me, because I don't want to look like an idiot. Haha. Thanks :P

hvnlyumbrlla December 17 2011, 19:15:48 UTC

Ohhh psh-aw, you'll do wonderfully, I'm sure. And everyone is affected differently! If you have any questions, feel free to ask :D