Communion

[septemberoses]

Title: Communion
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Pairing: Godric/(Eric)
Word count: 3200
Rating: PGish (except for the bit with Eric) for blasphemy, threat, impure thoughts, Mary Sue (Godric's next door neighbor in this earlier fic.)
Summary: Godric meets a nice Christian boy for a chat about faith, chess, natural fabrics and repentance

Comments

[devohoneybee]

MMMMMMMMMm, this is beautiful. It helps that I happen to live in Albuquerque, and New Mexico IS that enchanting, and Chimayo is a very tenderly healing place.

I love the interweaving of the non-sexual with the lustful, here, and how easily Godric moves between the two.

[septemberoses]

Oh, lucky you! That's so funny, a reader in Albuquerque ... you read my Valentine's Day fic in Santa Fe, right? And (no surprise) I've been to all these places. Can't you see them there? It would be a short trip for them. Keep an eye out...

[bloodthirstylt]

Oh my god I loved this fic. I love love love how you write Godric. I'll try to come back and coherently explain what i love about it so much, but you write him in a way that shows he's always thinking...that his brain never stops and i could really relate.

The location descriptions were completely lovely

[septemberoses]

I actually thought of you with this one, whether the hints of noncon would be an issue (although as it's Godric, it's not "really" noncon)... I guess it was okay. And yes, that's the way I think of him, his brain, this ancient being, how all these thoughts, and the past and the present, get woven in his head. And I'm sure my love of New Mexico shows through, it's a gorgeous place.

[bloodthirstylt]

*smiles* I loved it. I have never gone, but this fic honestly makes me want to go there for a bit just to look around and see what Godric is speaking of.

[redangel618]

i really like it when Godric takes care of people. i also like his disgust with manufactured fabrics and how he just wants to make the world better in small personal ways.

[septemberoses]

The fabric thing is a weird kink I have in my head, based on those organic-looking things he was always wearing in the show :)

[redangel618]

i may have a personal thing about unnatural fabrics and totally see his point about them. i don't order my shirts from anyone, but i wear a lot of cotton.

[keenoled]

Looovely! I adore your Godric, all his little quirks, so much!

[septemberoses]

I love my Godric so much ... we will NOT be talking about last night's episode, ohno. And it's such a pleasure to come up with these quirks, which I think he'd actually have after so many years.

[keenoled]

Nooo, let's talk about how gay last episode was. XD
And yes, so much yes on quirks.

[septemberoses]

Hey, check your PM.

But it made me SAD, sosad. And not enough mansexing to compensate. That would have been PG in my fics, not THAT hot.

[moon_lover68]

A fascinating and beautiful scene. You have really captured Godrics voice and thoughts with your writing - I'm not describing it very well, but it's a very non human style. You can see his age and his experiences.

You are quickly becoming one of my favourite net writers :)

[septemberoses]

Hey, thanks so much! Godric would sound rather non-human, wouldn't he? When I hear his mind, I hear a stream of thoughts, all running together.