heavy in your arms

Nov 14, 2012 12:31

heavy in your arms
Wufan/Luhan/Yixing
2,373 words | NC-17
he tries to fall in love before the sun rises
a/n: title from song by the same name by Florence + the Machine & this is for linna because this and also because i promised her a fic on twitter :3

He wants to pull them closer, till there are no spaces between the dips of their bodies. )

exo, krishanlay, krishan, layhan

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chaoua November 14 2012, 02:21:18 UTC
ANNIE

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chaoua November 14 2012, 02:35:12 UTC
i will eventually come back with a better comment

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shihan_ai November 14 2012, 02:58:35 UTC
HEHE. AND HERE I THOUGH 'ANNIE' WAS THE WHOLE COMMENT :P but yes please come rescue me from these feelings that you evoked kthnx

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chaoua November 15 2012, 03:21:13 UTC
honestly that was the whole comment, but you deserve more!!!

this was tooooooooootally not what i was thinking for my verse or w/e, but fuck i love it. i never meant for kris to be so in love with luhan, for lay to be so greedy over luhan, so to see it here is brilliant.

LIKE I LOVE THAT LAY IS SO ROUGH UGHHHHH i love that lay is the mean one fhkdjfh

this comment is not any better than the ANNIE but shdlkfjdshfklshdfkj

You’re important to me, he wants to say to each of them. T^T this line is it, the point, that they're all important to each other in whatever way, and each way isn't more or less important than the other. it's just sometimes they are selfish and want what's best for them individually or wathever

pls let me hurl feelings and ideas in big comments more often at you pls

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hipployta November 14 2012, 03:17:51 UTC
Aww...Luhan has turned into a battlefield for Yixing and Wufan...but it doesn't have to be that way boys

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shihan_ai November 14 2012, 03:52:50 UTC
they should just be happy and have sexy fun threesomes tbqh lol

thanks for reading and commenting~

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taffyn November 14 2012, 06:45:49 UTC
God this ot3 is so perfect I can't

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shihan_ai November 14 2012, 22:21:03 UTC
omg ikr krishanlay is /such/ a good ot3 because their dynamic is so ripe with both sexual attraction, friendship and potential for conflict and angst~~~ i wish people wrote them more :(

thanks for reading and commenting~

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gilldebee November 14 2012, 10:33:53 UTC
homg prection

this is so hot and bittersweet, the tension omg ;~;

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shihan_ai November 14 2012, 22:15:35 UTC
hot and bittersweet is my favourite fic combination tbqh lol. luckily people write it quite often :D

thanks for reading and commenting~~

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indira22 November 14 2012, 16:36:35 UTC
they will learn to share...i hope (if not...Luhan will be end up moreeee than a sore behind XD)
i mean OT3 is work..awesome!!

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shihan_ai November 14 2012, 22:13:49 UTC
haha for everyone's sake (but especially luhan and his behind lol) let's hope they work it out and find a way to not turn every session into a competition.

thanks for reading and commenting

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