Do you have critique for me? Leave it here!

Please be specific with your crit! I can't hope to improve if I don't know what I'm doing wrong. :) Links to relevant threads, posts, and/or logs are definitely appreciated.

Anon = ON.
IP logging = OFF.

Writing this at like, 5 AM after a con. HURR.

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A list of items Squall has received from others while in Nautilus, which will likely be forever incomplete, since I'm starting it so late.

Italics are from other characters (in parenthesis), regular text is from the city.

( idea shamelessly stolen from Dawn, btw )

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