Deafening Silence - Chapter 4 of 5

Aug 22, 2011 14:55

Title: Deafening Silence - Chapter 4 of 5
Author: silmanumenel
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Rating: PG-13, for some language
Pairing: Danny/Steve, pre-slash, will turn into slash
Warnings: Angst
Revised Word Count: Overall: ~18.000 - Chapter 4: 2.272
Summary: Danny is behaving strangely and no one knows why. When Steve finally finds out, he might not like the ( Read more... )

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finduilas_clln August 22 2011, 13:51:15 UTC
“Can you come over?”

OMG YES YES YES!!!

*waits patiently for next chapter* Oh, who am I kidding, I have no patience! I'm dying to know what happens next!

Loved this chapter. Danny's Mom is great.

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silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:01:26 UTC
I really liked writing Danny's mum as well! I mean, Danny's whole personality has to come from somewhere. :) Next chapter coming soon!

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kitmerlot1213 August 22 2011, 13:52:51 UTC
Could Danny's mom be any cooler? I submit that she can not :)

Good for her for helping Danny to face the truth, that he's in love with Steve and completely terrified of that fact.

And now we're going to get a Steve/Danny conversation where our boy puts it all on the line--I can't wait :)

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silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:10:21 UTC
I think sometimes you need your mum to put things straight when you get all confused. :)

And you'll certainly get a Steve/Danny conversation! There's a lot to talk about for the two of them.

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ellie_pierson August 22 2011, 14:32:09 UTC
Mom's make everything better. Who else was going to call Danny on his running...well besides Kono?

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silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:12:35 UTC
:D You're right, your mum often knows you best and calls you on it when you're being stupid.

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antivol August 22 2011, 15:31:38 UTC
What a great mom, Danny is lucky! Steve trying to convince Danny he's being good now was really cute! Great chapter, and great story!

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silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:13:51 UTC
Thanks, I had fun writing Danny's mum! I imagine her to be quite the special lady.

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jimpage363 August 22 2011, 16:37:56 UTC
Danny's mother is awesomely calm and sensible here.

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silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:15:24 UTC
I guess she needs to be. If Danny's siblings all have the same personality he does, some has to stay sensible to keep them in line. :)

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