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Duty or Loyalty - Prologue Part 3

Nov 09, 2011 21:56

Title: Duty or Loyalty - Prologue Part 3
Author: silmanumenel
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: None here, will eventually be Danny/Steve
Warnings: None, as far as I can tell.
Word Count: 1.459
Summary: Danny's life is not what you would call normal, and growing up is not exactly easy when half of your family belongs to the mafia. Or: The AU ( Read more... )

duty or loyalty, hawaii five-0

Comments 15

pairatime November 9 2011, 21:51:21 UTC

I love this story so much, I look forward to it each time you up date

silmanumenel November 10 2011, 14:06:18 UTC

Thank you so much! :D I'll try to update sooner this time.

pairatime November 10 2011, 14:25:00 UTC

I look forward to it then

mangacat201 November 9 2011, 22:25:54 UTC

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... new chapter. Only reproach: Too fricking short. Poor Danny, Two souls and all that... lets hope he doesn't get into trouble soon (yeah, fat chance...)

silmanumenel November 10 2011, 14:07:10 UTC

Danny getting in trouble? What makes you say that? :D But the next chapter is going to be longer, I promise. :)

simplyn2deep November 9 2011, 22:53:36 UTC

sweet new chapter! so much love!

looking forward to the next update!

silmanumenel November 10 2011, 14:07:53 UTC

Thank you, I'm happy you like it. :D Next update will come sooner I guess.

kitmerlot1213 November 11 2011, 18:20:03 UTC

I just read all three parts of the prologue and I find this story very intriguing. I like all of the layers you added to Danny's Irish/Italian family and how conflicted he is with being in law enforcement and having the mafia be part of his family as well.

Can't wait to see what happens next :)

silmanumenel November 11 2011, 22:06:24 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm really happy to hear you say that! :D I'm glad Danny's conflicts come across, I just thought it'd be very difficult for him. He's such a family-oriented person and at that the same time he's so devoted to his job and to doing his duty.

It shouldn't take me too long to update, the next part only needs some editing. :)

abbeyrd62561 November 12 2011, 04:58:59 UTC

I am really enjoying this AU and how you are going through the years with Danny. I can't wait until he moves to Hawaii and see if something with his family goes down. This is so good , glad i caught the chapter...

silmanumenel November 13 2011, 22:02:57 UTC

Thank you, I'm really happy you like it! :D Something with his family will definitely be going down...