Something so Inevitable

Apr 05, 2005 14:54

I took her hand, her fingers curling around my hand, grasping so tight I felt my bones would crack and shatter. She looked me in the eyes. Hate burned in that stare, cold dead hate. I had to look away. Her other hand slowly stroked my face, the backs of her fingers drifting across my stubble, catching and rubbing. She smiled. I can't tell if there' ( Read more... )

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rainl8tly April 5 2005, 20:59:25 UTC
once again you have an amazing talant..I love reading your stuff, it is a marriage between love and hate. It is darkness and light..great stuff I always look forward to reading your material.

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skarob April 5 2005, 22:29:51 UTC
i glad you like! it's always good to see someone actually getting my work

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u take my breath away jacis_emma April 5 2005, 23:33:54 UTC
u r sooo amazing!! i don't know u r nethin, but i brag bout ur writing to all of my friends, and they love it too

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usednails April 5 2005, 23:41:28 UTC
as incredibly awesome that was to read, it was so morose. not a bad thing. just brings back familiar memories that sometimes i like to forget. but you made me think. i like people that make me think.

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skarob April 6 2005, 09:07:01 UTC
i'm sorry if what i wrote caused you undue hurt, but i am glad it made you think.

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orangebubbleyum April 6 2005, 00:25:57 UTC
Truth is beauty, beauty truth...

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skarob April 6 2005, 09:06:02 UTC
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder....

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antisthenex April 28 2005, 02:30:30 UTC
But as humans, we all find beauty in some of the same things.

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skarob April 28 2005, 10:30:13 UTC
name one...

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[me:]Hey look a piece of shit [someone:] nah that's just skarob talking out his ass again anonymous April 6 2005, 08:30:56 UTC
Shit, shit; and more shit. Man just grow up. Burned out. No more fuel to ignite. Save it for the next round. Die and become the man that you need to see yourself as. Fuck, live a little.

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Re: [me:]Hey look a piece of shit [someone:] nah that's just skarob talking out his ass again skarob April 6 2005, 09:04:37 UTC
'Live a little'? have I not? my apologises, how dare I write something and put it on the net. Shame on me, for I am truly sorry. You words have shown me the true path of enlightenment. Now do you have something more constructive to say, Mr No Name?

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