Through Sickness and Health, Part 4

[skipturnstep]

Title: Through Sickness and Health, Part 4
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae
Author: Skipturnstep
Rating: R (for language)
Genre: Romance
Words: 3,297
Summary: Flashbacks of the ups and downs of Kyuhyun and Donghae's relationship, told in five parts.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3

WARNING! Spoilers under the cut.

Comments

[scovilleunit]

your characterization of Heechul is spot-on, my gosh, i wanna hug youuu ♥♥ LOL XDDD

OHMYSHISUS ZHOUMIIIII D:< D:< (I swear I stan KyuHae too much I could hate Zhoumi if I needed to) LOL Kidding. XD

Kyuhyun is an ass. A big ass for doing that to Donghae. But I still love him. So yeah.

PLEASE EXCUSE MY INCOHERENCY, I HAVE A SORRY EXCUSE FOR A BRAIN INSIDE MY CRANIUM RIGHT NOW. T_____T

CANNOT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATEEEE ♥♥♥♥♥♥
ugh my mushy brain is mushy

[skipturnstep]

XD thank you so much! I love your comments, theyre adorable! <3 jsyk te last part should be up in a few hours ^____^

[russsel]

Is it bad to say I wanted Kyuhyun to suffer more? :) I mean, the boy put Donghae into so much pain. Donghae would have sold his soul to the devil if it meant that Kyu would stay with him forever, and for him to just practically grab a pair of scissors and cut away at Donghae's heart like a poorly-made arts and crafts project by a toddler was the worst blow anyone can give. What more could Donghae have done? What did Zhou Mi have that Donghae didn't? Kyu needed repentance, but at least he found that by being thrown out by the same person that started it all.

But that doesn't mean I didn't feel bad for Kyu. I was so heartbroken when he broke down because he knows he messed up and he knows he deserves it.

He remembers thinking that he would gladly get into another car accident if it meant this pain would subsideThis quote is just so depressing. Him thinking of the event that cemented their relationship as a means to end everything else is very sad. It's always bad to see someone break down like that

[skipturnstep]

No, it's not bad to wish suffering on Kyuhyun because I was doing the same thing while writing. He was really dumb, he deserves what he got~

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Yes, there's only one more chapter, but I am in the middle of writing a sequel to this, so I hope you'll read that as well!

[lahaela]

I'm sorry, but as I said I dislike Qmi. So

[skipturnstep]

XD I love that you're talking to them! And it's okay that it took a while. BUT READ THE REST OF IT NOW. and the first chapter of the sequel herpderp

Oh my god there's no way I am the best fanfiction writer ever omg. That's crazy. D: /overly flattered
^///////^ <3 thank you for enjoying it~

[lahaela]

You do realize that your good grammar makes you better than 80% of other fanfiction writers? Okay, yeah, I just made that number up but it sounds good. And it's pretty true...I don't know why I've read so many fanfics with bad grammar but they make me shudder.
Haha yeah last night I actually had a headache so I'm going to go read the rest right now P:

Thank god Qmi is over 8DD My heart is at peace, equilibrium has returned, kyuhae nirvana has been reached...?

[skipturnstep]

I believe that the only reason I have good grammar is because I've been writing fanfiction since I was a wee tyke entering the fifth grade. Harry Potter fanfiction herpderp But then again, my school has always stressed the necessity for proper grammar and have pretty much installed it in our heads like a program. .-.

/massages your head :3

[kyuhaexd]

omg it so sad when reading the begining, lol and so who's the hero and who's the heroine?! :D i hope kyuhuyn is the heroine and donghae is the hero! :D i know heroine is a gurl what i mean is...yea like that lol! :D