Thought I should mention this since I never actually address it in the story:

Helali masa, Helali alda, and Helali eraka (three of the most common phrases in the story) simply mean good morning, good afternoon, and good evening.

Chapter 11 should be posted soon (it's finished, but I still need to read through it).

In the folder where I keep all of my TGG related stuff, I have a folder called "Lost dialogue." It's where I keep scenes I've cut out of the chapter. On occasion, I'll take some of the "lost dialogue" and put them in another chapter, but normally I remove them because 1) they had no place in the chapter or 2) they were horrible ( Read more... )

Tonari gave a small shrug. A rat scurried out of one cell, stopping in the hallway and sniffing around before running into another cell. “Sacrifices must be made toward the greater good. If a few peasants must perish, then so be it ( Read more... )

When I play a game that allows me to customize a character, I ALWAYS make TGG characters (and make their skills and what not based off the character in the story). I do this because 1) I can't draw so this is a way for me to show other people what the character looks like and 2) because I like the character ( Read more... )

This is simply an updated version of my first name meaning post with additional meanings for names (as well as more characters) as well as other famous people/characters that share their name.

( A name is just a name... right? )

This is chapter ten, completely revised.

( Chapter Ten )

This is Chapter Nine, both sections. The main reason I'm reposting this is due to some editing and a complete rewrite of Gareth's rape scene.

Warning: Mature Content

( Chapter Nine )

To be posted ( Read more... )

Not for those with a queasy stomach I suppose.

( ... Yum. )

The second half to Chapter Ten. Important stuff in this chapter is mainly Selena's backstory. Working on this chapter has really made me appreciate Selena more as a character, so expect her to play a larger part in chapters to come.

As of this chapter, the story is 162 pages long with 76,505 words (give or take a few). Booya.

( Chapter Ten (Part two): The Past Returns )