School of the Hopeless Ch 4 (016. Quiet Places, Yesung/Ryeowook)

Aug 02, 2009 16:00

Title: School of the Hopeless Ch. 4: Just Listen
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook (YeWook, KiHae)
Prompt: Quiet Places
Challenge 016/100
Completed 012/100
Rated PG
Summary: All Yesung wanted to do was confess to Ryeowook. Now some bad timing could lead to the end of one relationship and stop the formation of another.

[ Ch 1] [ Ch 2] [ Ch 3] [Ch 4]

Never had he seen Yesung so broken, so shattered; not when he fought with Heechul, when he thought his turtle died, not even when he found out his dad had been in the hospital )

chaptered, rating: pg, 100 suju fic challenge, !superjunior, pairing: yesung/ryeowook

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g_myzo August 8 2009, 09:12:39 UTC
aww, this was a nice series.. ^^
lots of hurt emotions going on in that shed scene but they fixed that right up and it was great..
the flashback was so cute. and dangerous o_o lol at wookie thinking yesung was trying to kill himself
and the little ttangkkoma part, trying to climb the bean bag , cute~

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skutner613 August 10 2009, 05:24:16 UTC
Thanks for sharing which parts you liked
makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ^///^
and thank you so much for reading~♥

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laphotoparfaite August 9 2009, 04:21:15 UTC
ahhh. i just read all four parts to this and i love it.
i love yewook, but there arent enough people who write it :(
i love how wook and yesung have their own special place to escape to ♥
are you going to write more chapters to this? i hope so. i love it soo much.
good luck with your future storiess!

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skutner613 August 10 2009, 05:26:20 UTC
Let me get this out of the way first YEWOOK OTP~! ♥
I'm thinking of writing more but for now I'm a little idea-less so IDK when it would be out >.<
But thank you so much for reading and commenting~<3

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almondsluber August 13 2009, 05:41:59 UTC
WOW. I AM.....BLOWN....AWAY....REALLY.....YOU MAKE ME COME TO.....A LACK OF WORDS. WOW. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START....FJSIJFASJFAWOIEPFWIPOEFJIMCSIDJFASKFJASFWJEOFJWIOEFIOSNCSBJCBNZIUSHDFUIWBFAWNFAW WOW.....JUST.....WOW....

I AM A HUUUUUUUUUUUGE FAN OF YEWOOK. LIKE SERIOUSLY THEY ARE THE MY OTP OF ALL OTPS! DFJAOIWEPJFPOHWFIOHWIJAFSDFASOHFAWOIFH AND I JUST ABSOLUTELY ADORE KIHAE!!!!!! GAH. TWO OF MY FAVORITE OTPS PUT TOGETHER. AND YOUR WAY WITH WORDS! REALLY.....GAH...WOW........I'M.............BEYOND HAPPY. THIS MADE MY HEART JUMP AT ALL THE PERFECT SWEETNESS~~

FDOIFJAOWIFJWIOEHFEWIHGWEFH I REALLY HOPE YOU'LL CONTINUE THIS. I'M IN LOVE..REALLY!

::GLOMPS ON YOU FOREVER AND EVER::

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almondsluber August 13 2009, 05:44:11 UTC
OH. AND FOR SOME REASON. THERE ARE VERYYYY FEW YEWOOK WRITERS! AND MOST OF THEM JUST PUT THEM AS A BACKGROUND COUPLE! IT DRIVES ME CRAZY. YET HERE YOU ARE WITH ONE OF THE BEST YEWOOK'S I'VE EVER READ [WITH KIHAE!!!!]. I AM FOREVER IN DEBT TO YOU :D

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skutner613 August 13 2009, 19:44:34 UTC
Omo~! Thanks so very VERY much :D
I also hate the fact that Yewook is so neglected as a couple
But I'm sort of dry on ideas for the moment -.-
Would you like to make any suggestions for my writers block?

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almondsluber August 13 2009, 22:24:05 UTC
:D No thank YOU~
ㅠ.ㅠ I know~ They're too neglected but they're like the perfect couple. All that sweet dorkyness and sex godness all wrapped up in one couple ::dies in happiness::
Aw writers block sucks!
Hmm well where do you think the story is going. It seems kinda complete too in a way, but I never want it to end! ㅠ.ㅠ Hmm but does YeWook still have to tell the other members? Maybe you can work something around that. And maybe you can put some drama in there. Maybe. Or some fluff perhaps. Like as in drama. Someone trying to steal KiBum/DongHae/Wook/YeSung from the other. Or perhaps an accident? Like a car crash? .__. I HAVE NO IDEA TOO ::CLINGS:: I'M SORRY!!! ::hums Sorry Sorry and starts dancing around in which ever room Skutner613 is in:: :D

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skutner613 August 13 2009, 22:50:05 UTC
Right? They're just like the most awkward loving couple ever♥♥

And thank you so much you've given me the ultimate inspiration!

*Goes to you and huggles!*

[BTW you can just call me Lili, no need for formalities ;D]

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amasakireyoko September 5 2009, 12:59:20 UTC
Love it! Love it! LOVED IT! ^____________^ I'm grinning like a chesire cat over here! This was my first ever YeWook fic and it's great! Those two are cuter than I thought. Kekeke~ I especially like the scene about the necklace. I only knew they made them into bracelets, not necklaces. Kekee~~ hope you'll write more of these drabbles sooon!

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skutner613 September 9 2009, 22:36:42 UTC
No worries, YeWook is my OTP so hopefully they'll be around often :D
(And I saw that necklace at the fair the day before I wrote this, it just stuck in my head XD)
Thanks for reading~♥

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