Comments | smcthegreat: High Wire, NC-17 (3/3)

smcthegreat

High Wire, NC-17 (3/3)

Jun 07, 2011 21:08

Title: High Wire
Author: smcthegreat (Sara)
Rating: NC-17 for language, violence and sexual situations
Length: 9155
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee, there'd be a hell of a lot more angst, UST and sparkly dances. Also, continuity and character development. Any similarities to known superheroes is purely coincidental. No copyright infringement is ( Read more... )

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smcthegreat June 10 2011, 06:26:02 UTC

LOL. I kind of love that you exclaim aloud at this fic. It means I did my job and you're getting into it. YAY!

There's nothing mindless about Rachel Berry aka Eden. Everything she does is for a reason. Even if that reason is just to scare the hell out of you by walking off a building. ;-)

dysforic_dreams June 14 2011, 05:32:02 UTC

Eden is a bitch like that. But it IS incredibly angsty when you have her do that.

PS - I just wanted to say on here, I think one of my favorite parts is the scene with Arty and Justice. Justice is SCARY in that part. I can't decide if I want to be a bad girl so she'll have to come talk to me or if her sightless eyes are enough to scare me into being good.

Lovely work. :)

adkaSJFHBSZJKNFLJABKFH mehay June 12 2011, 08:12:44 UTC

So in general I'm not very good with words, which you of all people should know. So, uh, I think I'm just going to have to go with what they said... and by 'they' I mean all of the above. Why is your writing so frakking good??

Re: adkaSJFHBSZJKNFLJABKFH smcthegreat June 13 2011, 23:01:53 UTC

I dunno about good...but I'm pleased you liked it. When I'm not feeling weird about someone I actually know reading my angsty girl slash stories.

Thanks, though. For reading and for leaving a comment. You know what I mean.

Re: adkaSJFHBSZJKNFLJABKFH mehay June 14 2011, 00:45:44 UTC

Hush. It's better than good. You will take the meager compliment my vocabulary limits me to, and like it *twitch* but yes I know what you mean.

beannie13 June 13 2011, 17:33:26 UTC

*deep inhalation* THAT WAS AMAZING! I feel like the little boy at the end of The Incredibles, sitting on a tricycle with popped bubblegum.

As a massive superhero geek...I loved it. Was seriously dubious to start off with but wow, that was really well written. I'd love to see it continued, really curious as to how Q & R got into their alter egos in the first place!

Wow. I'm still reeling... *off to read it again*...

smcthegreat June 13 2011, 23:07:13 UTC

LOL, that mental image has me laughing and nodding my head in appreciation. I can dig it.

Superhero geeks represent! You know, an idea has been percolating in my brain the past few days about these two. I'm thinking there will be another installment, perhaps with some back story but that might have to be it's own tale in and of itself. There's a lot to explore with these two. We shall see.

Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed. :-)

letterstomaddie June 15 2011, 16:12:23 UTC

OUTSTANDING.

warriordebs August 16 2011, 20:23:56 UTC

Firstly really awesome fic!!! Your characterisations are great, the superhero concept is genius, & wow the love scene was HOT!!!! In short I loved it!!! But OMG that was just like a teaser, I want more & it looks like I'm not the only one lol. In all seriousness if you do decide to write more in this series, I will be there to read it & promise to comment ;o)
Thanks for sharing!!!!