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All Comes Down

Apr 30, 2006 23:15

All Comes Down
Rated pretty smutty
Jared Padalecki / Chad Michael Murray
Written by daysoflo
Graphic by buhfly
Huge, enormous thanks to ink-stain for being a truly wonderful beta.

( All Comes Down )

Comments 38

azewewish May 2 2006, 03:47:24 UTC

Oh, baby.

This is, honestly, just the way I like them best. Fucked up over each other and fucked up about the world, and yet still shuffling towards something together. Angst, but in the best possible way.

<333

alwayseven May 3 2006, 05:32:14 UTC

Thank you very very much. I'm pleased as punch right now.

I love the Chad and Jared angst and I don't think I will ever get enough of it. Ever.

:)

azewewish May 3 2006, 15:39:30 UTC

Hey, feel free to write as MUCH as you want. *g*

phaballa May 2 2006, 03:47:31 UTC

That was lovely. I don't even like CMM and I enjoyed it very much. Maybe because I don't like him and he was such an asshole the whole time, seemed very in character to me :P Nicely done, and hot! And lovely artwork as well.

alwayseven May 3 2006, 05:22:06 UTC

Thank you very much.

I don't know what it is about him, I hate to love him, and love to hate him. And I just love the idea of him and jared together.

Thanks again. :)

loveflyfree May 2 2006, 04:06:58 UTC

that was excellent. you made me like a story with CMM. I don't know what to do with that, but this was so so good! hot and angsty and just right. fantastic!

alwayseven May 3 2006, 05:33:46 UTC

It's weird, right? Liking Chad all of a sudden totally hit me over the head, just because I read a couple stories of him and Jared and I was all "oooh, I LIKE this."

Thank you very much. I'm all aflutter with glee right now. :)

thepsychotik1 May 2 2006, 06:17:47 UTC

This was really good. This is exactly the type of relationship I can picture them having. They way everything progressed just seemed so natural, I really liked the way you depicted all of it. I hope you write more, I'll be looking forward to it. =)

alwayseven May 3 2006, 05:30:22 UTC

Thank you so much. What I love most about the idea of them together is the buddies hanging out, best friends thing and I really wanted to try to get that out.

Thank you again. :)

ethrosdemon May 3 2006, 00:28:04 UTC

Dear You,

You just made my year. This story rules the entire universe, Vogons be damned! Chad is a complete dickwad, but a human being, and that's a fine line. Jared is clueless and insightful in equal measure, and that's so him. The style is fluid and lovely. There is LOTS of pornography, something I always relish, and the pornography is GREAT. Jensen is obviously off-screen in love with Chris, which makes this the OTP fic of my HEART. I have been waiting my whole life for it.

K

alwayseven May 3 2006, 05:35:51 UTC

You give the most AWESOME feedback. I will print it out and carry it in my pocket forever and ever.

Yes, Jensen is so totally off-screen with Chris and my brain wanted to go off in that direction but I had to shut it up. It's hard to not put them together.

Anyway, YOU made MY year. Seriously. Thank you.

Also, I am in LOVE with your icon.