Try It Again (Part 6)

[snapsparagus]

Here's Part 6.  Thanks for the comments - previous parts can be found at my journal.  A little language in this one, nothing major.  :)

Comments

[katwoman76]

I could have done without Marissa and kind of hope Ryan does too ;)

And I really hope Ryan doesn't get in too much trouble, when he is doing what I think he will do next.

Really liked the Seth-Ryan interations in this chapter

[snapsparagus]

Fair enough: I'm not a Marissa fan either, LOL. But I did kind of like how she was out of the loop here.

I'm working on writing Seth...he doesn't come naturally to me. I'm glad if he and Ryan seem convincing here. That makes me happy.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

[katwoman76]

But I did kind of like how she was out of the loop here.
Believe me, I enjoyed that. I just hope, she doesn't find a way to weasle her way back into Ryan's life. He is better off without her.

[60schic]

I'm with you, kat---but I do so love any time Marissa doesn't get her way with Ryan---or gets lied to by Luke. Not sure how snapsparagus plans to proceed with Ryan, but I sure hope he doesn't get the crap beaten out of him again!

[chrisear]

oh no... stupid ryan

[snapsparagus]

I know! I know. ;)

Thanks for reading & commenting.

[fifimom]

Great update, in fact it inspired me to go back reread the previous chapters. I'm really enjoying this fiction. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[snapsparagus]

Thanks! Your comments mean a lot to me. :)

[alluxera]

I like your story very much. Ryan was kind of relaxed and enjoying himself... until M. showed up and than the incident with Seth, now I'm a little bit worried. Sometimes he can be a little bit impulsive, lol.
Thank you.

[snapsparagus]

Thank you. Yeah, Ryan had a bit of a rest...but I couldn't keep it going! I'm a little worried about him in the next chapter, too. I hope to start writing it tonight....

Thanks for reading & commenting!

[fredsmith518]

Liked Seth very much here watching out for Ryan, sorry that Seth was bullied, but it certainly makes him understand some of Ryan's problems.

[snapsparagus]

Yes, I think you're right - Seth's situation here must help him understand Ryan a bit better. Thank you for reading & commenting. :)