2 different beginnings to the same story. It's not like I'm forcing you to read, but I'd love to have your opinion on which one looks better. Maybe it will help me clarify things. So, I'd be grateful if you took a look and just tell me which you'd prefer? You don't even have to bother with the whys. Gee, I'm such a beggar, aren't I?
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beginning No1 )