Apps Page v.3

[somarium_lords]

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Comments

Revision

[somarium_lords]

Unfortunately we cannot accept your application at this time. While the application was good overall, the Personality and Third Person Sample section needs to be revised.

The personality section seems to focus too much on Ichigo's attitude towards the beginning of the canon and could still be expanded. Perhaps talk about how his reaction to his Shinigami duties or how he has grown through his experiences.

For the third person sample, we feel as if it is too short to judge Ichigo's voice and mannerisms correctly. As such, we would like you to provide us with a new sample that would allow us to see a bit more of Ichigo and how he goes about things.

If you could reply to this comment with the revised Personality and Third Person Sample section, we will review it and give you a response ASAP! You have until October 9.

Accepted!

[somarium_lords]

Congratulations~ You've been accepted into the RP! Please follow the following instructions so you can be ready to hop in and join the fun.

- Create a character journal (if you haven't already)
- Join somarium, somarium_ooc, and castleofdoom. Joining spamarium is optional!
- Comment on the Taken List and Contact List to be added.
- Comment on the Friends Add and follow the entry's instructions to add/remove characters into/from your friends list.

For the following two steps, please use an LJ-Cut and the 'Date Out of Order' option. If you do not know how to do so, refer to this post. This is just to prevent f-list flood spam.
- Fill out the Profile meme and post it in your journal (and use an lj-cut).
- It's not required, but if you want, you can create a Voicemail entry in your journal.

- Introduce yourself and your character at somarium_ooc (don't forget the tags!)
- Be sure to read about the Dreamberry and the Posting guide to familiarize yourself on how to post both journal and community entries.
- Check out the Special Permissions Post Directory whenever you get the chance

Accepted!

[somarium_lords]

Congratulations~ You've been accepted into the RP! Please follow the following instructions so you can be ready to hop in and join the fun.

- Create a character journal (if you haven't already)
- Join somarium, somarium_ooc, and castleofdoom. Joining spamarium is optional!
- Comment on the Taken List and Contact List to be added.
- Comment on the Friends Add and follow the entry's instructions to add/remove characters into/from your friends list.

For the following two steps, please use an LJ-Cut and the 'Date Out of Order' option. If you do not know how to do so, refer to this post. This is just to prevent f-list flood spam.
- Fill out the Profile meme and post it in your journal (and use an lj-cut).
- It's not required, but if you want, you can create a Voicemail entry in your journal.

- Introduce yourself and your character at somarium_ooc (don't forget the tags!)
- Be sure to read about the Dreamberry and the Posting guide to familiarize yourself on how to post both journal and community entries.
- Check out the Special Permissions Post Directory whenever you get the chance

Estellise Sidos Heurassein | Tales of Vesperia | Reserved

[remedyings]

Huzzah~♥

Accepted!

[somarium_lords]

Congratulations~ You've been accepted into the RP! Please follow the following instructions so you can be ready to hop in and join the fun.

- Create a character journal (if you haven't already)
- Join somarium, somarium_ooc, and castleofdoom. Joining spamarium is optional!
- Comment on the Taken List and Contact List to be added.
- Comment on the Friends Add and follow the entry's instructions to add/remove characters into/from your friends list.

For the following two steps, please use an LJ-Cut and the 'Date Out of Order' option. If you do not know how to do so, refer to this post. This is just to prevent f-list flood spam.
- Fill out the Profile meme and post it in your journal (and use an lj-cut).
- It's not required, but if you want, you can create a Voicemail entry in your journal.

- Introduce yourself and your character at somarium_ooc (don't forget the tags!)
- Be sure to read about the Dreamberry and the Posting guide to familiarize yourself on how to post both journal and community entries.
- Check out the Special Permissions Post Directory whenever you get the chance

[ascendant_gaze]

Yay!

REVISION

[somarium_lords]

Unfortunately we cannot accept your application at this time. While the application was good overall, the pesonality section needs to be revised.

Your personality show's a good grasp on the character, however it seems to jump around a bit. You focus a lot on the good aspects of her personality, which is fine. Aside from occasionally getting fed up and frustrated, is there any other negatives she has? Does she have any fears or worries? What are her hopes and dreams?

We'd like to see the personality expanded just a bit. If you have any questions, please ask.

If you could reply to this comment with the revised personality section, we will review it and give you a response ASAP! You have until 9 October 2011.

Re: personality revision c:

[ascendant_gaze]

Fluttershy's character is one of such kindness that she worries extensively over her friends, being pony and animal alike, as well as concern for nature: plants, flowers, etc. She has a habit of being single-minded; Meeting Fluttershy for the first time she is timid, shy, and can barely manage to say her name to Twilight Sparkle but when Spike is brought to her attention Fluttershy immediately comes out of her shell to go and speak with Spike and implore him to visit with her all the while complimenting him on how utterly adorable he is. This single-minded tendency shows that when she was focused on something she was highly interested in that she can come out of that reclusive state of being and in the process becomes accustomed to Twilight's presence as well. This also can be a negative trait for Fluttershy because of her fear for adult dragons; when focused on the fear that she has for them she draws back into her fearful state of being. At one point, in the series, alongside her pony friends Fluttershy is on the way up a mountain

Accepted!

[somarium_lords]

Congratulations~ You've been accepted into the RP! Please follow the following instructions so you can be ready to hop in and join the fun.

- Create a character journal (if you haven't already)
- Join somarium, somarium_ooc, and castleofdoom. Joining spamarium is optional!
- Comment on the Taken List and Contact List to be added.
- Comment on the Friends Add and follow the entry's instructions to add/remove characters into/from your friends list.

For the following two steps, please use an LJ-Cut and the 'Date Out of Order' option. If you do not know how to do so, refer to this post. This is just to prevent f-list flood spam.
- Fill out the Profile meme and post it in your journal (and use an lj-cut).
- It's not required, but if you want, you can create a Voicemail entry in your journal.

- Introduce yourself and your character at somarium_ooc (don't forget the tags!)
- Be sure to read about the Dreamberry and the Posting guide to familiarize yourself on how to post both journal and community entries.
- Check out the Special Permissions Post Directory whenever you get the chance

Sky High | Tiger & Bunny

[sidecharacter]

[Player name] Ruri.
[Age] 25 years old.
[Personal Journal] sidecharacter.
[Other characters currently played] Clovis la Britannia [failedprince].

Middle

[Third Person]Keith had been trying to get himself accustomed to living in Somarium. He had found himself a new route that he could take John on, but would like to find a nice bar to have some lemonade in. It was always nice to have some place to cool off in, since he foresaw that he would be quite busy just as before. However, he felt at ease in these thoughts because the others were with him, too. Just as Miss Blue had said - he believes in his friends and believes that they can ensure that Somarium would be as safe as Sternbild is. His chest filled with such joy as he looked up at the name at the latest bar that he was trying out

[sidecharacter]

[Sample post]
[First Person]

[With his helmet on, he holds the dreamberry in one hand as his other salutes to those that may be watching.]

Hello, everyone! I am Sky High. [And John barks at his side, but Keith gestures for the dog to quiet as that will give him away.] It seems as though I have ended up here by means that I do not know. But I shall do my best to ensure that each and every one of you is safe until I return to my city, Sternbild! Should you need anything, please do not hesitate to call me! [His hand settles over his chest, bowing his head slightly in turn.]

Of course, I have but one question in return … [Slight tilt of his helmeted head.] Where am I?

Accepted!

[somarium_lords]

Congratulations~ You've been accepted into the RP! Please follow the following instructions so you can be ready to hop in and join the fun.

- Create a character journal (if you haven't already)
- Join somarium, somarium_ooc, and castleofdoom. Joining spamarium is optional!
- Comment on the Taken List and Contact List to be added.
- Comment on the Friends Add and follow the entry's instructions to add/remove characters into/from your friends list.

For the following two steps, please use an LJ-Cut and the 'Date Out of Order' option. If you do not know how to do so, refer to this post. This is just to prevent f-list flood spam.
- Fill out the Profile meme and post it in your journal (and use an lj-cut).
- It's not required, but if you want, you can create a Voicemail entry in your journal.

- Introduce yourself and your character at somarium_ooc (don't forget the tags!)
- Be sure to read about the Dreamberry and the Posting guide to familiarize yourself on how to post both journal and community entries.
- Check out the Special Permissions Post Directory whenever you get the chance