(roadhouse, travel with man and his little girl then stopover. more on new origins - but also need more coherent version :P)

( 'Is this going to be a long story?' )

(other sequel to Queen's Man, finish last half - some parts were in desktop notes?)

( Raike paused outside his liege's tent, realising as soon as he saw the crumpled sentry on the ground that he could well die today. )

(still need to work out where Tintauri stands on opinions of raising the dead - too cold for malice but too cold for excessive sympathy either - 'better than nothing' approach?)
( 'I do it because they tend to deserve it.' )

(experiment to create newish northern countryside and a muddy accent. not liking this much. try from other perspective after 'Lady's Incorruptible' [when IS Scadamain at Immovan's?])

( 'King's forces down'a Ermine Crossing now.' )

(where did the rest go?? must be in knick-knack box still! check AGAIN in Feb)

"Could we not discuss my arse?" Isaille snapped, glancing up ( Read more... )

(clearly post-Cochalyon's death. Arathalian trying to convince year-shifters long-distance to stay put. year written down somewhere else - find or recalculate. Seithenyn? Seithanyn?)

( 'Believe me, Seithanyn-prince.' )

(more to add later - remember to tidy/format ALL entries from today too)

( Midsummer ought be spent in one's home with one's family and friends. )

All that silver bleeding in the shallows -
and your ankles sunk in it, melded and wet
as if it were your star-blood, star-girl,
as if you were wounded but still laughing
because you were made of light -
that was just the moon, wasn't it?

(never see Ancaladis working magic - was rest deleted? other file?)

( They groped on blindly, stumbling in the dark, afraid of what might be coming next. )

(don't like direction of story, but cut and add things to later chapters; atypical Dael behaviour? not quite believable yet, modify)

( 'Hey! Big boy!' )