BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 4 / 12

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter Four

Kara took a deep breath as the raptor docked in the Pegasus hangar bay.  She’d never expected to come back to this ship again - certainly not while Lee was still commanding it.

As she jumped down from the raptor she couldn’t help remembering the last time she’d been in this hangar bay.  Standing waiting for the raptor from New

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[jatnj]

Well, that was a difficult reunion. Hopefully, old wounds will heal - preferably before the wedding. =)

I'm sorry you're sick. I hope nothing worse than a cold. Feel better soon.

[suffolkgirl]

Thanks, it is just a cold, but a nasty one. However, I've just finally got to see Unfinished Business, so that has cheered me up! :)

[jatnj]

Yes. I could see how it would. =)

[ez_as_pi]

Well, the first meeting is at least behind them... I do like the way you portray Dee here. :O)

[etilia76]

What a painful but so believable reunion...I could feel Lee's hurt feelings as well as Kara's guilt and pain...heck, I want to hug both my pilots!

Great conversation between Kara and Dee. You made me understand and feel with Dee - who picked up the pieces and really tried to be there for Lee in this story, I think - and at the same time I wanted to slap her for being so nasty to my girl...whoa. Protective Dee is impressive and scary at the same time.

Hopefully Kara will get her second chance...awesome story, can't wait for more!

[etilia76]

I've just seen that you feel sick - I hope you feel better soon!

[suffolkgirl]

You made me understand and feel with Dee - who picked up the pieces and really tried to be there for Lee in this story, I think - and at the same time I wanted to slap her for being so nasty to my girl...whoa.

Don't worry, Kara gets her own back later on :) But Dee does have a point, and I felt it was one somebody needed to make to Kara. Whether she listens or not is another matter.

She is going to get her second chance, but not that easily...

Thanks for asking about me being ill, I've just got a nasty cold and am feeling a bit sorry for myself. Watching BSG and Veronica Mars this afternoon has cheered me up though :)

[suffolkgirl]

I suppose I'm more interested in Dee than I am in Anders - I always liked her, and I got annoyed by how the BSG writers have treated her character recently. I feel the need to give her a fair deal.

Glad you liked the Lee-Kara conversation and thanks for the 'now' pick-up - it's the kind of thing you miss when you're writing.

About your ficlet - I have read it, but haven't had time to comment - I will go and do so now.

[wildrosesings]

Yay! New chapter!

I wish the writers would get around to giving Dee the spine you've given her here.