BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 12 / 12

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter Twelve

Kara had never been good at waiting.

It wasn’t her style.  She liked to be fighting, acting, moving.  But now there was nothing else for her to do.  She’d fought for Lee as far as she could, made her feelings clear to him.  The ball was in his court now; all she could do was wait to see if he returned it.

But it wasn’t easy,

Comments

[paiger1218]

Absolutely love this fic.

picking up the pieces 12

[anonymous]

What a perfect ending! You have captured Lee and Kara so well. I could literally feel the tension between the two of them, then the happiness, then Lee's panic when he woke up alone, then the relief, and back to happiness!

Wonderful job!!!!!

Re: picking up the pieces 12

[suffolkgirl]

Thanks mick, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing every chapter. Reading your description makes me realise this chapter was more of an emotional rollercoaster than I thought!

[aberforthsgoat]

Sigh...if only.

[boom_queen]

Yay! I'm full of warm squishy Pilot-induced feelings!!!

And you maintained a really good sense of tension right through the end, so that it wasn't one big fat mushy-fest. Beautifully done, and thank you again for writing this series!

[suffolkgirl]

Thankyou, I did my best to avoid mushiness, so glad it worked :)

Love your VM icon by the way. I'm a big VM fan too.

[gibgirl04]

I loved it! The whole thing was just wonderful! Thanks for the fun!