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BSG fic - Picking up the Pieces 12 / 12

Dec 20, 2006 18:34

Chapter Twelve

Kara had never been good at waiting.

It wasn’t her style. She liked to be fighting, acting, moving. But now there was nothing else for her to do. She’d fought for Lee as far as she could, made her feelings clear to him. The ball was in his court now; all she could do was wait to see if he returned it.

But it wasn’t easy, ( Read more... )

bsg fic - picking up the pieces

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tracyj23 December 23 2006, 23:07:18 UTC

Finally! It's taken me forever to find the time to read this but I've been dying to!

It was everything I hoped it'd be - they ended up together and willing to risk everything to trust again - but it wasn't so sappy that it wasn't believable. Bravo! You write Kara and Lee so well that you can feel the tension and relief flowing through your own body as you read. You are one of my absolute favourite authors - I wish I could write as well as you. :)

Have yourself a great Christmas and once the holidays are done I'm hoping you'll get started on the next great story for us. :D

suffolkgirl December 28 2006, 20:48:59 UTC

but it wasn't so sappy that it wasn't believable.

You couldn't have said anything that made me more happy! I was very worried about this getting too sappy.

And you're one of my favourite authors too - I really enjoy your writing, particularly your short introspective pieces, and as I was saying the other day reading your stories really helps me to understand Kara. Don't sell yourself short! :) I see you have posted something while I was away, must go and read...

No ideas for a new story yet, but I'm sure I'll think of something....!

Hope you had a lovely Christmas.

canadiangirl_86 December 27 2006, 08:06:59 UTC

This was a great read! Thanks for writing this.

soleiltropiques December 29 2006, 03:52:53 UTC

Hello there,

Well, I'm very sorry for not saying this earlier, but I truly enjoyed this one. Thanks for posting! It was a nice
look at what might have been if Lee and Kara were less frakked up than they are on the show and actually *capable* of healthy relationships.

Sigh. Therapy, in other words. :-)

suffolkgirl December 30 2006, 08:25:54 UTC

Writing it was definitely my therapy!!

Glad you enjoyed it.

mlsky April 30 2007, 22:18:44 UTC

Another perfect ending. I loved the small touches...Lee waking alone and fearing the worst...both making a leap of faith and trusting the other.

Truly wonderful story that hits all the right notes.

suffolkgirl May 1 2007, 20:46:44 UTC

Thanks for all the comments, I enjoyed reading them. :)

Glad you enjoyed this one, it's definitely my Lee/Kara wish fulfilment story, and it was good to give them a happy ending. Writing it got me through the angst of early season 3.

koolaidmom11 January 21 2012, 16:09:02 UTC

Just read this again for the bazillionith time and I just love it. I'm not sure if I ever told you before!

:)))