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BSG fic - Lost and Found 7 / 15

Jan 14, 2007 11:00

Chapter 7

“What the hell did they do to him?” Kara said fiercely, eyes burning. “He didn’t even recognise me!”

“At least you got him to speak,” said Cottle, glancing through his papers. “That’s more than I’ve been able to manage.”

“Yes, to ask his own name!” Kara shot back. “That’s very encouraging.” She folded her arms across her chest ( Read more... )

bsg fic - lost and found

Comments 16

goth_sweeting January 14 2007, 11:45:18 UTC

I don´t wanna cry over this, you are so not gonna make me! (sobs:) Anyway, wonderul job, cannot wait for more

suffolkgirl January 14 2007, 13:22:30 UTC

Thank you for commenting, glad you're enjoying the story. And hey, don't cry, at least Lee's alive! :)

ez_as_pi January 14 2007, 13:29:37 UTC

*super glues my pilots together...*

suffolkgirl January 14 2007, 13:37:25 UTC

Okay now I'm busy laughing at the images that has conjured up in my head!

ez_as_pi January 14 2007, 16:18:23 UTC

hee!

jatnj January 14 2007, 14:56:58 UTC

Oh, Kara. You'd better mean that!

I love this chapter..Lee's connection with Kara despite not being able to remember her.

Well done.

suffolkgirl January 14 2007, 22:32:42 UTC

I'm glad the connection is believable, that he's drawn to her even though he doesn't remember her.

lost and found 7 anonymous January 14 2007, 15:20:25 UTC

Poor Lee, Bill, and Kara--my heart is breaking. There were tears in my eyes trhoughout this entire chapter. What a nightmare for all involved.

I hope Kara is able to get Lee through this. He's going to need her strength.

I like your Cottle here, too.

Looking forward to chapter 8!

Excellent job!!!

mick

Re: lost and found 7 suffolkgirl January 14 2007, 22:34:51 UTC

It's weird that I'm posting this here just when you're posting your story at AR, as they're covering such similar ground at the moment. I had tears in my eyes after reading your chapter today.

More Cottle in chapter 8! He's such a fun character to write - i must put someone in life station in the new story so I have an excuse to write him in. :)

Re: lost and found 7 anonymous January 15 2007, 02:27:17 UTC

You know, as I was rereading this, I realized that your fic and ours are similar!

I also wrote a fic called "Lost" and it's sequel called "Found."

Thanks for your kind words--I guess we both had tears in our eyes at each other's stories today.

Yes--put Lee in life station in your new story!!! (sorry, couldn't resist!)

mick

sracheg January 15 2007, 17:00:23 UTC

I promise, next chapter I'll read with a kleenex on my pocket. I feel really silly sobbing over a fanfic xPPPP

suffolkgirl January 15 2007, 17:16:20 UTC

I'm happy you find it worth sobbing over. :)

Next chapter is much happier! Lee and Kara actually have a conversation!!