BSG fic - Lost and Found 11 / 15

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter 11

A few days later, Kara told Lee she was going to Colonial One.

“I’m taking the President some reports from your father.  He’s swamped at the moment.”

It was true, although she didn’t say that she had offered to go.  She had another reason to visit Colonial One.

Sam.  She needed to talk to him.  Should have done so a long time

Comments

[wickedgillie]

methinks I heard the other shoe dropping! please make it better soon, eh? it's hard on the heart!

[suffolkgirl]

Don't worry, they have a (very tall) guardian angel lurking in the wings to bang some sense into their heads. :)

[wickedgillie]

I wonder if said guardian angel knows how often he plays the role of deus ex machina in fics? Gods bless him, lol.

[suffolkgirl]

He could start up his own business, couldn't he?

"Helo, matchmaker for star-crossed pilots"

Maybe I'll have to get Gaeta to act as peacemaker in my next fic, just for some variety...

[ez_as_pi]

*grabs kleenex and teddybear, crawls under desk*

I've read this part like a million times and it still makes me want to call my momma and cry on her shoulder.... so, well done! Seriously, well written chapter...

[suffolkgirl]

I've read this part like a million times and it still makes me want to call my momma and cry on her shoulder

See, that makes me worry I'm incredibly twisted and hard-hearted, because this chapter makes me laugh! I was re-reading it before I posted it today, and as soon as Lee says "Did you say married?" I was chuckling for the rest of the chapter.

I think it's just the way all her deceptions come crashing down on Kara's head in the worst possible way...I love it when a Big Misunderstanding comes together.

[ez_as_pi]

Well, I can see that. Kara was juggling a lot of balls and they just all fell on her head.

I just feel so bad for Lee, cause he's still got these massive blank spots and for Kara, cause she's really trying to make it work in her own, terribly screwed up way!

I just hate when pilots are unhappy... it's not you, it's me. :O)

[abluegirl]

Ohhh. That one really hurt. *wibbles*

[suffolkgirl]

Don't worry, they've got four chapters yet to sort themselves out. :)

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[anonymous]

Well, I knew that sooner or later Lee would find out the truth. It's kind of ironic that Dee was the one to let it slip. Kara was so close...

And Lee is still Lee, even with the memory loss. He can shut down in an instant!

I actually feel bad for both of them here. I hope they are able to straighten everything out and talk without yelling!LOL

Another wonderful chapter!

mick

Re: lost and found 11

[suffolkgirl]

I'm not sure if Dee let it slip by accident or deliberately. I left it rather vague.

[nvrpromise]

O.O;;;

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