To Please The Monster Inside [Carlisle/Jasper][Chapter 34]

[surgical_rush]

Title: To Please The Monster Inside [Chapter 34]
Pairing: Carlisle/Jasper
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Characters owned by Stephenie Meyer.
Summary: The monster inside Jasper lusts for human blood. When the desire is too strong to resist, there is only one who can help. Carlisle tamed this monster once, and now he must try again.

Comments

[surgical_rush]

Don't worry, I may have grinned once or twice while writing it.

x

:D

[harrietmary]

I love you!!!

This was amazing , even better than I anticipated this was a great way to end my shitty day.
I loved this line 'Oh well, Carlisle thought, if the bed doesn’t hold up, there’s always the floor.'
I can't express how good this was and the whole scene was very hot to put it simply.

The last chapter was really good if James fucks things up I will be very sad.

I really want to see the consicences of Jasper and Carlises actions, I'm partically waiting to see Edwards and Alices reactions.

xx

Re: :D

[surgical_rush]

Thank you, I love you also. I'm very happy to hear it exceeded your expectations and that you enjoyed it so much.

:D

x

Yeah Finally

[jakedward]

Felt like I've been waiting forever for that scene but it was well worth the wait, of course now that they've had their happy moment James will probably try and screw everything up thinking it's a fun game, of course Edward would be able to sniff it out, but James know his ability now and he may act like a vicous animal, but he's definitely smarter than one, hope to see more, unlike some people.

Re: Yeah Finally

[surgical_rush]

Thanks, sorry I made you wait so long. lol.

Glad it was worth it.

x

[dead_horizons]

=D *DANCESAROUNDTHEFUCKINGROOM* The scene we've all beeen waiting for. *cough* sex *cough*

Fuck off james grrrr.

Yay been at a music festival past four days and i'm tired as fuck and you can still make me dance. Meaning you're a damn good writer. :D

x

[dead_horizons]

uhuummmm i am now ging to switch to decaf after reading my comment. UPDATE SOON :D

[surgical_rush]

LOL.

Dancing around the room is the best reaction I could hope for.

Thank you.

Hope your festival was a blast. Who was playing?

Thanks again :)

[dead_horizons]

Slipknot, Faith No More, Korn, Killswitch engage, Pendulum, Papa Roach, Devil driver ...

Write more Carslisle/Jasper sex scene and ill freaking dance around london. Though that might get some strange stares O_o

x

finally!!

[forgetluv]

whooooooooohooooooooo!!!!! i nearly faite readig this! you have just made my day! i swear you have o get published!

Re: finally!!

[surgical_rush]

I think there would be some copyright issues if I tried to get this published - but it would be wonderful if I could (maybe I'll just have to change the names and stuff).

Thank you, xoxoxox