as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away) [part 2/2]

Oct 13, 2012 16:08

Title: as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away)
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.

Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used:  i + ii

Sehun looks at Junmyun and Junmyun understands that it isn’t about the girl, it’s about Junmyun and Kyungsoo and love and acceptance and something called letting go. )

pairing: sehun/suho, length: oneshot, rating: pg-15, !fanfic

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:13:39 UTC
I WAS GOING TO SPOT FOR YOU ALREADY BUT OKAY \O/

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:45:51 UTC
crying and sobbing because this is not perfect omg but thank you so much myung oppa <3 and all the perfect parts are because of your betaing lol the ending was so rushed bc i sort of gave up :/

and can i hug you forever because you are so cute ahhh will you marry me ;;
um. okay ignore that apparently i am also insane when i get too much sleep uhhhhh /bricked

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:17:05 UTC
spot for pandataoris because revenge is an awesome idea although i made this so weird sorry OTL

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:17:51 UTC
spot for changie because mochi is awesome and omg i ate ice cream mochi the other day IT IS DELICIOUS AHH /bricked

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changdictator October 13 2012, 23:21:18 UTC
HOW DARE YOU EAT MY FAMILY HOW DARE YOU

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:24:03 UTC
SORRY CHANGIE LOL I'LL AVOID EATING MOCHI IN THE FUTURE? but it's so good sobs

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changdictator October 14 2012, 04:22:03 UTC
aiyah so sorry it took me a whole afternoon to finish reading this because I kept getting writer's envy and going back to double-check your AGE ARGH RAWR WHAT DO YOU EAT YOU FREAKISHLY GOOD LOOKING FETUS WITH BEAUTIFUL VOICE AND PERFECT FIC UGH YOU.

I knew this fic would be gold as soon as I saw the plot outline sobs--which thank you so much for sharing with me, I am honored. But more than that I had to keep rereading "He has failed. Over and over. Again and again." because good god the words just kept burning my eyesss and sobs. And this was just great and so well written and l o l I can't believe you finished this in 9K?!?! and sobs your words are so natural and easy and sobs I just sobs STILL JEALOUS CAN YOU HOLD MY TEARS FOR A SECOND while I slap myself back to normality ugh. But basically I loved the way you ended this~ I get this really really big looming feeling over my head--the feeling you get when you finish reading something just right, and this was right in all the ways ( ... )

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:18:31 UTC
spot for jie jie <333333333333333333 i love you ^^ and you need to get better! D: eat more tofu haha <3

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thisismylastlie October 14 2012, 17:36:18 UTC
aww, thank you, mei mei

okay, so let me say HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SURE YOU'RE ONLY FIFTEEN WHAT IS THIS WORD MAGIC WHATEVER AHHH

the introduction was fucking UNF let me just say like damn

I did NOT see junmyeon killing kyungsoo coming at ALL I was like WHAT JUST HAPPENED because I thought kyungsoo would be jongin's killer but NOPE NOPE NOPE and I definitely didn't expect junmyeon to kill anyone omg

THIS IS JUST SO FANTASTIC MEI MEI
even if you made my bao bei a murderer then killed him lmao

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swabluu October 14 2012, 17:43:04 UTC
JASKLDJFKLSJADFKJASKLJDFKSALDJFKLSDAFKLSADFKSAJDFKLJASDFK FLAILS I AM SURE I AM FIFTEEN LOL OMG YOUR BIRTHDAY IS COMING UP WAIT YOU'RE TURNING SEVENTEEN HOLY SHIZFRIZZLES wat

jak;lsdfj;ladsf;lsadf;slajf;lsadfsa omg well mission accomplished for me then lol \o/

THANK YOU SO MUCH THANK YOU SO MUCH <33333333
it's all changie's fault she keeps on making kyungsoo a murderer and then killing him lmao

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thisismylastlie October 14 2012, 17:47:56 UTC
I'm turning sixteen actually :D I'm only a year older than you but you're like a bazillion years better than me LMAO

omg I should've known it'd be cha lmao

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swabluu October 13 2012, 23:19:47 UTC
SPOT FOR SWEE BECAUSE I AM STILL YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN FOREVER \O/

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paradisist October 14 2012, 07:06:54 UTC
BLUU. YOU DID NOT WARN ME.

I love this so freaking much. At first I was really daunted by the starting but as i got on with it i was like WTF AM I READING OMG I'M FRIENDS WITH THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS

Do you feel the love yet.

All this time i was on my toes thinking omg omg omg and i do not even ship sehohun ok (what a crappy otp name i gave it hurhur sue me)


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swabluu October 14 2012, 17:09:05 UTC
SORRY I DID NOT WARN YOU. UM.

as i was reading this comment i was like WTF AM I READING OMG I'M FRIENDS WITH THE PERSON WHO IS GODLY AND ADSKFKSLDJFKAJFKDAF :D

I think I'm feeling the love thus why I am incoherent and too afraid to answer everything in my lj inbox LOL

I like sehun but sehohun lollol yes \o/ :DDDDDDD


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