as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away) [part 2/2]

[swabluu]

Title: as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away)
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.

Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used:  i + ii

Comments

[swabluu]

spot for kei because kei is the awesomest person on earth and because sobbing at what just arrived in the mail you didn't have to send all that ;AAAAA; <33333 ajdklfjsa

[kei17]

WAHGAWHWAJSHDHJABDJDNALNABZJBSKABSDVANJABSHDSBSALASOSBSBSAKSNSBHDJAALBDVDHSKALABDUSNAKSKDHDHGHDNSSBHDJSBSDHKDDKFHDMSSMKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

see bluu~ i think ive learned your keyboard smashing technique

THIS WAS AWESOMEST HOW COULD YOU HOW HOW /HOW/

FUCKING TEARS IN MY EYES. OTL
you reduced me into a cursing sobbing mess
#IDONTWANTtoLIVEanymore

bt seriously bluu this was soooooo beautiful. and amazing and all kinds of magnificent.
ifeltthelovemananditwasamazing.

sorry for this useless shit of a comment.
YOU HAVE SUCCESSFULLY MADE ME THINK SEHO IS POSSIBLE i still ship sulay to death but exo has 66 ships so

ILOVEYOUBLUU~

[swabluu]

LOL OKAY AJSKDFJKADSLJFKLDSAJFKLJSAD YES I HAVE BECOME A MASTER AT TEACHING KEYBOARD SMASHING 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

REALLY TEARS OMG AND AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE YOU TOO AHHHHHHHHHHHHH but all awesomeness is credited to myungdae and changdictator really ;A;

[kei17]

LOL NO BLUU IS AWESOME!
i cant believe i am even allowed to talk at the greatness that is bluu~
lmao

[swabluu]

SPOT FOR PIM LOL HOW MANY SPOTS AM I MAKING xDDD PIMCOLE EXISTS JUST ADMIT IT :3

[akaanee]

oh my god i may need another mug of coffee mm hm yes

[swabluu]

omg pim get some sleep read this tomorrow or something lol

[akaanee]

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

/claws at ur face

i will be back with a coherent comment tomorrow because it's 2 am and my jaw's still on the floor so
o/

[seulpeo]

WHAT

[swabluu]

WHAT WHAT? /blinks
you would not believe the random sound effects that just went through my head i just had the image of a hare going "wot wot" ummmmmm

wait sorry confused oh wait YOU YOUUUUUU YOU ARE THE PERSON I WORSHIP ummmm /hides
/flails

[seulpeo]

oh gosh i forgot my emoji TOO BLOWN AWAY BY THIS FIC (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

so uh i was reading this so it can join the rest of the challenge 5 fic up on aideshou right now!! (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ but lmao a wot wot hare, thats cute ;; (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ
my WHAT was mostly just like "WHAT THIS FIC WAS SO GREAT" (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ i get super biased when voting bcos i selective-read even as a mod!? (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ but i couldnt resist commenting and letting you know i enjoyed this! (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

((((WHAT DO YOU MEAN WORSHIP, YOU POOR DISILLUSIONED CHILD I AM NOTHING TO LOOK UP TO ;_; (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ))))

also please do not question the incessant use of my emoji (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

[swabluu]

AHHHH FLAILS FLAILS FLAILS REALLY AHHHHHH FLAILS and that is a very amazing icon yes :D wot wot is very good, very good yes i need less sleep or maybe i need more sleep what ._. incoherent.

WORSHIP. WORSHIP. YOU PROBABLY DON'T REMEMBER THIS BUT I WROTE AN ESSAY FOR FINEST THING IN HISTORY AND COMPLETELY JUST FLAILED OVER IT ;AAAAAAAAAAA; WORSHIP

it's all good (=ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ /bricked

[the_maknae]

sobs y u no leave spot for me

anyway, SPOT SPOT FREAKING SPOT i will be back ;;

[swabluu]

SORRY OMG ;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA;
JUST
TOO MANY PEOPLE ASKING FOR SPOTS I HAVE THE MEMORY OF A GOLDFISH SORRY ;AAAAAAAAAAAA;

[the_maknae]

firstly, i am sorry for taking so long to fill my spot ;__;
secondly, WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME.
kyungmyeon were so happy together and then BAM kyungsoo becomes psychotic killer and BAM joonmyun kills him and...what. what even.

but omg the suhun was perfect ;A; the broken!kyungmyeon ripped my kokoro to pieces but the suhun fixed it back a little hurhur. i nearly crossed over to the suhun-shipper side. DO NOT MAKE ME. /clings to hunhan and kyungmyeon

aargh i loved this to bits ;; all the best for aideshou bb!

[swabluu]

no need to be sorry :D

um. /hides

SORRY I DIDN'T WANT IT TO HAPPEN I BLAME CHANGDICTATOR SHE KEEPS ON WRITING ABOUT KYUNGSOO THE KILLER AND IT'S INFLUENCING ME. DO YOU HEAR THAT CHANGIE? YOU ARE A BAD INFLUENCE ON ME ;AAAA;

omg thank you thank you thank you you should ship suhun even though i ship hunhan what ;A;

alksdjflkadsjflkjsalkdfjlkasdjflsjafjksadjl thank you so muchhhhhhhhh ;AAAA; sobs

[starrymoons]

at first when the first suho/kyungsoo thing started i thought it was going to be another one of those fics where the character lives in 2 universes but then it was like oh...oh. and the way you kept connecting kyungsoo and mentioning the murders in the paper i knew it was him tbh.

ngl i totally thought kyungsoo had killed jongin and that junmyun didn't want sehun to go after kyungsoo because he still loved him and all but nope. ;w; but suho couldn't say that he was acting in self-defense? because technically he was and all ~__~

but cries the ending ;__; i didn't think sehun would kill the guy and he didn't and he and suho end up happy and it's all good ;___________;

[swabluu]

2 universes omg i am not godly enough to write 2 universes LOL ;A; but yay! i'm glad you figured it out. it shows that my foreshadowing skills are somewhat noticeable LOL ^^

YES THAT WAS ACTUALLY SORT OF MY VERY ORIGINAL IDEA but i thought that it would be too expected, and so i must be random and just throw the readers off track heh. and i thought, you know, in this sort of situation, you can't really say it was in self defense. the court verdict said it was in self defense. but it's not really the focus--it's more on the actual fact that suho did kill kyungsoo.

;A; thank you so much ;A; jadkfljlaksdjflkdasjfad

[starrymoons]

yeye it was more about how he was being a hypocrite and all ~__~ but jw did they ever find out that kyungsoo killed all those people? or did they have no evidence since suho was the only witness and he...kinda killed kyungsoo and all.

[swabluu]

techincally, they did, because suho was discharged because of "evidence of self defense" which i sort of meant to mean that they found out about everything kyungsoo did and so suho was innocent because he didn't really have another choice and stuff. i think. did that even make sense ;A;