as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away) [part 2/2]
Title: as the smoke clears (watch as ashes fade away)
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.
Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used: i + ii
( Sehun looks at Junmyun and Junmyun understands that it isn’t about the girl, it’s about Junmyun and Kyungsoo and love and acceptance and something called letting go. )
Rating: pg-15
Pairing: sehun/suho, broken!kyungsoo/suho
Length: ~9400 words
Summary: And in the end, Junmyun learns it isn’t only Sehun who needs to learn to let go.
Written for aideshou's fifth challenge ^^
prompts used: i + ii
( Sehun looks at Junmyun and Junmyun understands that it isn’t about the girl, it’s about Junmyun and Kyungsoo and love and acceptance and something called letting go. )
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;AAAA; thank you so much ;AAAAA;
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really sorry cos incoherent.so much happened just now and now this fic.i'm just drowning in feels ok? Thank you so much because I really love this story ♡
/showers you with kris' aegyo
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don't worry i'm even more incoherent 8D
omg kris's aegyo gahhhhh don't talk to me about kris's aegyo i shall forever facepalm and kcon and exom and engrish and aegyo and ahhhhhhh xD
thank you thank you thank you so very much sobs
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Seriously, though, this is really nice. The way you created the mood and how everything seemed bleak, making me tread carefully as I read because I feel like something's going to spring at me and I'd scream in shock. (I'm sorry, I comment weirdly and just...ignore me.) But yeah, I actually thought that Suho killed Jongin. Then, after a while, I thought it was Kyungsoo who killed him instead. BUT NO. Suho killed Kyungsoo and I was like O_O what. In the end, I'm just so relieved that Sehun came back because if Suho hurts one more time I'm going to stab someone, probably myself, because I can't handle him being sad like that.
I really liked this. Really nicely written. :D
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jaklsdjfklsadjfkldjsafkld thank you so much sobs i do not deserve this praise ;A;
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I had several theories too, as already mentioned by other people here.
I kept on thinking if there was some sort of connection among the four of them other than what's stated, but really this is nicely weaved...intricate and raw.
Hunho is my OTP and I've been searching all my life for ages for a story that would depict them in this sense; angst with a touch of sweetness.
You completely nailed it! Their moments of vulnerability and hesitation really did hit my emotions. An the way your words flowed throughout the story, just wow!
I'm really glad I found this gem. One of my favorite works ever!^^ Thank you so much!
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yeah that's what i was aiming for, to make everyone think that they were all connected, and actually, it would have been really interesting to write EXCEPT MY BRAIN IS NOT SMART ENOUGH AND I COULDN'T FIGURE OUT HOW TO MAKE THE PLOT WORK IF THEY WERE ALL CONNECTED LOL but thank you so much omg ;A;
REALLY OMG YAY SUHUN SHIPPERS YAYYYYYYYYYY except hunhan is like my otp right now oops what did i do
jsadfklsadfjl;ksdafl thank you soooooooo much ;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA;
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wait i'll read this...
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i am putting this in my rec list this is an amazing piece of art AGAIN DON'T DENY
p.s.
you did not leave a spot for me //hating// LOLJK <3 love lots bluu! ^o^
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AND LOLLOL LJ LISTS YOUR COMMENT AS SUSPICIOUS LOL WHAT
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOREVER ;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA; I LOVE YOU OMG OKAY THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
AND I'M SO SORRY AHHH BUT THERE WERE EIGHT PEOPLE ASKING FOR SPOTS AND I COMPLETELY LOST TRACK OMG NEXT TIME PLEASE BOTHER ME FOREVER UNTIL I LEAVE YOU ONE ;AAAAA;
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sorry for the capslock heh xD
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pmsl okay will do that next time i will bother you wherever you are even in your dreams even if you're doing your history homework you will see my face on an abraham lincoln photo or something
eeeep WRITE MORE something fluffy and cute and omg i just--- hands down. i am your number one fan. i am tlist's number one fan lol <3
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