drabble: [numb3rs] temptation waits

Jan 03, 2006 16:07

Title: Temptation Waits
Pairing: Don/Charlie
Warnings: Incest.
Rating/Category: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: No one can resist forever.
Notes: Title nabbed from Garbage. Written for the Resistance challenge at numb3rs100.

Temptation Waits )

don/charlie, numb3rs fic, my fic

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Comments 19

melissima January 3 2006, 15:10:54 UTC
The chalk is long gone as you complete another circle of lick, rub, slide, and my gaze clings to your naked skin.

Thud!

Um...yeah, wow.

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sydian January 3 2006, 18:21:19 UTC
Hee, thanks for the comment! Writing drabbles always makes me feel a little itchy. I find it pretty challenging to limit myself to 100 words and still have them make sense. :)

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haltlos January 3 2006, 16:14:50 UTC
yummy... Like that! :)

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sydian January 3 2006, 18:23:10 UTC
Glad you do! :)

And boy, your icon is Teh Awesome. I always find myself staring at it for minutes on end, and then I get the overwhelming desire to rewatch the ep. *g*

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haltlos January 3 2006, 18:39:23 UTC
So do I! It's one of my favorites!

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honeyswallow January 3 2006, 22:08:20 UTC
Yeah, to me this is like... the Charlie/Don ep! And the icon's really cool anyway, with the brokeback quote. Luv it.

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honeyswallow January 3 2006, 22:23:27 UTC
Oh, heh, almost forgot...
An invitation indeed!
(my brother, my temptation) I somehow like this very much. Charlie is a temptation indeed, I wonder what Don must be going through ^_~
Luv your fics so much!

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sydian January 4 2006, 17:20:38 UTC
Thank you, my dear. :)

I love picturing them like that, Charlie in full seduction mode and Don just barely resisting him... *g*

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cat_willow January 4 2006, 03:47:51 UTC
This was a perfect fic for a drabble. There isn't much that has to make sense. Just temptation, seduction, and lust (Oh, my!).

Two chalk sticks up!

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sydian January 4 2006, 17:28:40 UTC
Two chalk sticks up!

:D Now there's a great visual! I think I'll adopt that... *g*

And man, your icon. Don's such a naughty boy...

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cassanlynx January 4 2006, 23:04:23 UTC
*g* Oh so wicked - yet sweet. I absolutely adore how he struggles to resist, even though I wouldn't mind at all if he just gave in. ;)
Thanks, this is certainly cheering me on a headache day. *smiles*

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sydian January 5 2006, 14:39:58 UTC
Oh, he will give in. How could he not? *g*

Glad you enjoyed this, despite your headache. :)

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cassanlynx January 5 2006, 15:54:53 UTC
I'm looking forward to reading all the lovely stories I'm sure I'll find here once my brain is less messed up with ideas for ficlets that I don't really have the time to write. ;)
And yes, you're right - he'll so give in sooner or later. *smirks*

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sydian January 5 2006, 17:03:47 UTC
once my brain is less messed up with ideas for ficlets that I don't really have the time to write

Oh boy, don't I know that feeling! I have a list with bunnies for this fandom as long as my arm... ;D Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading your ficlets. :)

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