I'd go with the first one. It is simplistic yet rich with color and texture, symmetry (I'm a big symmetry fan), and a border on the right side keeping your eye focused to the left where your text is. The second one is a great picture, but in my opinion there's almost too much going on for the viewer to be able to see the text at first glance. Probably more critique then you wanted, but what the heck. ;)
1st is better, but to be honest I don't like the font or the position for "Dana Melissa". The picture is good though.
The 2nd is a good picture as well, but I wouldn't use it here. The picture says to me, "Hey I just hacked up my husband. Anyone else fuck with me and you'll get the same." Good times, but I think you should save it to use as a movie poster for a low budget horror flick, or something else along those lines.
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more mature.
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The second one is a great picture, but in my opinion there's almost too much going on for the viewer to be able to see the text at first glance.
Probably more critique then you wanted, but what the heck. ;)
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The 2nd is a good picture as well, but I wouldn't use it here. The picture says to me, "Hey I just hacked up my husband. Anyone else fuck with me and you'll get the same." Good times, but I think you should save it to use as a movie poster for a low budget horror flick, or something else along those lines.
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