Comments | teffy: Jayne/River - Taking Him (2/2)

teffy

Nov 05, 2005 01:39

Taking Him - (2/2)
Jayne/River
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Jayne and River dance beautifully together.

This is a birthday fic for literarylemming that turned into a monster. It's a little departure from what I've seen in some other Rayne fics. First part found here.

( He's drawn toward her, a pull somewhere near his stomach. He just has to know if she can make good on all those promises. )

Comments 17

lattelady6 November 5 2005, 08:18:44 UTC

Okay, wow, that was really wow. Give me a second to catch my breath and I'll think of more to write.

wolviesrogue November 5 2005, 11:35:55 UTC

This was so fantastic that you simply must write more Rayne fic,i insist on it! Lol.

cccardiology November 5 2005, 14:05:39 UTC

*stutters*

I'll... be in my bunk.

ravenstarwind November 5 2005, 15:33:32 UTC

sdffkdjglkjdfrnmdfg

I'll be in my bunk...if I can make my legs work.

imagineforever November 5 2005, 15:37:02 UTC

Loverly. ^_^