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thoughts on frailty...

adyingatheist wrote in the__bards Feb 26, 2006 01:33

Had a sudden urge to write at 1.30 in the morning, despite exhaustion from an 8 hour shift. Didn't know what would emerge, and this is what did. So here it is, raw and untouched.

ps: don't like the title much, any suggestions...?

( thoughts on frailty... [working title] )

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braless_cup wrote in the__bards Feb 22, 2006 18:53

I just blurted this out onto paper all in one go, it's not been read-over or anything. All the words make little sense, but they make sense to me.

( not with you )

poem

artemis_67 wrote in the__bards Feb 21, 2006 21:55

Here is one of my early efforts...

( Hindley Street )

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debut

adyingatheist wrote in the__bards Feb 20, 2006 22:42

I think introductions are due. Hi all, I'm Rachel, and I hope you don't mind me making a little addition to your illustrious little community here. Aspiring to be a writer myself (but then again isn't everyone) I thought this would be a good exercise. Any comments would be most welcome.

I wrote this tonight, based on a recent experience.

( Empty Corner )

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braless_cup wrote in the__bards Feb 20, 2006 16:22

I've been forced all this time to look at you through tainted eyes of others,
I want to see you through my own,
I wish I could stop battling head over heart.

Two more poems, brewed inside my mind

ieatmousse wrote in the__bards Feb 18, 2006 00:30

Not gonna write here except to say that I wrote these on tuesday after school and none of you will understand the first one so just try and enjoy it (if you understand it then you know more about me than I realised anyone did). Either that or I'm becoming transparent and will have to put more half-truths out about me ( Read more... )

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god_part_ii wrote in the__bards Feb 14, 2006 23:03

( A poor human being, the Porcelain Queen )

god_part_ii

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braless_cup wrote in the__bards Jan 11, 2006 00:38

I wrote this a while back, I kinda like it I suppose.
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Ok, I'll post

ieatmousse wrote in the__bards Dec 21, 2005 19:16

It's been a while since I posted here so I should put up at least one new poem. After finishing my first book of poetry I became a bit lethargic with my writing but I'll start up again. Still need to get a new pad though. I found a replacement but it's yellow and turns me off writing. Anyway I'll stop talking and get on with the poems (the reason I ( Read more... )

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ieatmousse wrote in the__bards Dec 05, 2005 19:20

I'm not posting any more fresh poetry now. I've got another poem or 2 written yesterday and today but I might go back in my collection for a bit to try and work my way through.

( A few more from my list )